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Tall, brown hair. 17 junior A recluse in person, a presence felt online. I watch a lot of anime and read a lot of manga and other books. No longer single, engaged
What is an Achievement?
Mar 18, 2022
Anyway, after reading this, I need to find something fluffy to read. I'll be back for the new chapter!
To:Gen/Esis
Wait...I notice you didn't deny that she's an escaped catgirl...but you didn't confirm it either...Hmmmm...
Everything else is absolutely perfect...but I think she's cute like this, too!
I did notice though, that on the cover, Nisa's pupils are white...
An amazing plot twist would be if the mysterious(but cute!) stranger turned out to be an escaped catgirl and/or Nisa's sister, but don't change the story for me. I'm just a selfish weeb!
Literally, his only redeeming qualities in my eyes are that he a) created her, b) found her a good home, and c) saved her from further testing. Could've given Nick a freaking Visa Greenlight with a monthly allowance, or a onetime amount of like $1000 or something.
If you change 'swung' to 'swishes from' or 'swished' I'll rewrite the comment to remove that part.
*Laughing* Narrator: The door flies off its hinges with a terrible crash. Through the dust, three pairs of eyes belonging to three woke yanderes can be seen. Documentary: And here we have a pack of wild 'Yandereous Yuri', preparing to move in to finish off their cornered prey.
Mar 17, 2022
Bailey really thought they would let her live? If she wanted to be tortured, she should've just asked...
Hey...I was wondering if maybe, just maybe, Nisa could have a cameo in my novel? I'll run everything by you first.
Nisa! Hang in there!
Wh-wh-what k-k-kind of m-m-monster d-d-does that...and to a catgirl, of all things?!?!?!?!?!?!? Why did they need to do that? No wonder she's so shy and reserved...the amount of PTSD that that would inflict would destroy most people completely...but she troops on. I'm surprised she doesn't try to kill Hitoshi when he comes over...he may have created her, but that doesn't give him the right. My hope is that over time, Nick can coax the shell she's become back to life...I really do...*sniffles* that's the second time in two days something I've read has made me cry...
Siscon!
I don't see anything wrong with your writing other than small typos, grammar mistakes, and dropped commas.
To:Momentie
To quote Hitoshi: "But where's the fun in that?" Copyright Gen/Esis, 20XX