Sep 20, 2022
Pooka, I actually love this and wasn't sure what I was really getting in for at first, but the more I read the more I'm actually really intrigued. I told you I liked Alex, but I like April more and more as I read. And I really love how you're building Hell here! Thanks again for letting us read this and I'll be reading more! I can definitely see this as a manga and would watch the heck out of it as an anime, so good luck with the contest too!!
Sep 18, 2022
So we were reading it for the cold reading and we were debating on if he's serious about the catgirls/boys or not! We were kinda thinking like, "Hm, but maybe in the last chapter he'll rub his hands together and say, "Finally. I can make them".
But seriously, thanks so much for letting us read! I'll be reading more! I especially like the magic you'll see here and there!
Sep 18, 2022
I really liked this chapter, otk! I'm actually surprised they didn't just kill him and are instead taking him somewhere with how it was going, but I do wonder what goes on in the place they're taking him to be reeducated.
Also, thanks for letting us read this!
Aug 08, 2021
I know, so quick! I don't want to spoil much, but Ama will be back. ;^)
Sure! Braver-Tea uses ingredients like Agrimony and Lady's Mantle to help people overcome their fears and give folks a sense of confidence. This recipe works almost instantly, but only works for a certain amount of time.
I hope that explanation made sense! ;o;
Also, thank you so much for commenting!
Jul 29, 2021
To:Syed Al Wasee
Thank you so much! I'll do my best!
And okay, I'll give it a read. ouo)b
Jul 16, 2021
I'm so glad that you enjoyed reading this-- and with tea!
Jul 10, 2021
Thank you! I'm having a lot of fun writing this, so I'm really glad you had fun reading it!
I must be super lucky to receive such detailed and helpful feedback! I'll definitely make sure to focus on the narrative voice more and try to revamp that exposition. I'll also be a lot more careful with the voices. I had typed out how most of the characters speak in the planning phase, but thanks to you, I'm realizing that I totally didn't consistently follow through on my own notes.;;
As for a zanier witch cafe, it's a very fair point. I didn't want to stray too far from how mundane real witchcraft tends to be. At the same time, I've already strayed a little and real witchcraft really is so mundane that if I don't do something a little fantastical then it just ends up being a typical cafe. ouo;; So thanks for bringing that up as well. I already have my chapters outlined where only a few odd shenanigans go down, but I still have room to spice it up a little. :U
Really, thank you for taking the time to comment. All of it helps! And I'm still very glad that you had fun reading it!
Jul 08, 2021
I wish I could make even more puns!
Thank you so much for your comments!
All of the teas are technically things you can brew in real life, though perhaps without the magic and the effects. Maybe I'll throw some recipes up one day!
Jul 08, 2021
:^D ... :^) Perhaps...!
Thanks for reading! I appreciate it!