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Dec 23, 2024

Yumix; Unveiled [Vol01]

Chapter:1

Dec 23, 2024

And just like that everything comes to and end with BL.

I had a ton of fun reading this. You did a great job IMO with really showing how Dorian and Avery felt and everyone's views here, and I thought you did a great job with they Mayor as a villain here. The prompt IMO called out for something pretty political in a sense, and this is the first thing I've read that did something cool with that. Great job with this!

An Ode to the Stars

Chapter:20

Dec 23, 2024

To:Deleted User

異世界

Isekai a Isekai

Chapter:1

Dec 23, 2024

To:EliteWarrior910

Absolutely not!

Iero

Chapter:19

Dec 23, 2024

Propaganda music 😍

That aside, I really love how you're balancing everything here, especially with the Union and the conflicts around it.

An Ode to the Stars

Chapter:6

Dec 23, 2024

robot head? for free???

An Ode to the Stars

Chapter:5

Dec 23, 2024

Love the worldbuilding so far, well see if this cooks

Avalon

Chapter:2

Dec 16, 2024

To:EliteWarrior910

Bold of you to think Asta knows what her own plan is yet

Iero

Chapter:12

Dec 04, 2024

Congrats on winning the contest

Robot Catgirls Philosophizing on the Moon!

Chapter:1

Nov 18, 2024

To:EliteWarrior910

Thank you so much for catching that! Apparently 1am editing me decided to switch to third person for some reason, absolutely see how that was confusing to read.
Also, thanks so much for the read! I'll take what you said and see if I can put some of it in some future chapters!

Iero

Chapter:5

Nov 15, 2024

To:Steward McOy

Sky best boy

Iero

Chapter:2

Nov 15, 2024

To:SonDavid

Windows Vista the pinnacle of windows, prove me wrong

Iero

Chapter:2

Nov 12, 2024

Holy shit Arufa speaks street

Parallel in Two

Chapter:2

Nov 12, 2024

To:Shulox

Thanks for reading!

Heaven Bound

Chapter:2

Nov 12, 2024

To:Taylor J

One of my Japanese friend's singular motivation for becoming an English major was to watch Friends in English. Were all down bad

Heaven Bound

Chapter:9

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