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Jul 13, 2021
To:mugmoth
Thank you so much for reading and giving such a great feedback! I really appreciated that you pointed out some things that I missed. About the nickname he gave to his chief, it's because she's like a big sister to him, which was why he called her that way, she also called him by his first name and he had no problem with that (it's shown in chapter 2), I should probably fix it by adding more description here to avoid confusion. About the casual and professional thing, it's because it's his mom's death anniversary, so he deliberately slacked off on that day, distracted and not feeling like working overtime. Again, I should fix it by adding more description. Thank you again! I'll do better! 😊
This is really well-written! I really like the way you describe things. It enabled me to understand the MC's feelings. Like I could feel how frustrated he was with everything. And I think I saw it's already mentioned in previous comments that some paragraphs are too long, I agree with that. I had to reread some paragraphs because I lost my focus at some points (although it's probably only me and my short attention span lol). Look ing forward for more chapters!
To:Gurg
Even your comment made me laugh 😆 Thank you so much! Rest assured, the siren will make a lot of appearance in the future!
To:Deleted User
You don't know how many times I read this comment over and over again lol. This really made my day. Thank you so much. You're so kind! 😊
George! Finally! Also, I like the way you write. I enjoyed it a lot. I keep finding myself smiling while reading this. It's hilarious!
Jul 12, 2021
To:Kyōichi Abiko
Thank you so much for reading! Hope you'll stick around for more 😊
