Aug 08, 2021
To:EliteWarrior910
First of all, thank you so much for taking your time to read my writing. I know it's lacking a lot, but I'm glad you enjoyed it.
And secondly, thank you so much for bringing this to my attention. I wouldn't have realized it if you didn't mention it. I was aiming to show that they started seeing each other as allies now that they realized they had a common enemy. And I thought with their current fragile state and exhaustion, it was only normal that they would help and lean on each other. I failed to notice that the transition could be too jarring since it happened in a short time. And after taking your comment into consideration, I've omitted the falling asleep part and changed it into more narration to explain their situation further since I agree with you it's a bit too much. It's a miss on my part. I hope that now it would make a little more sense than before.
Thank you once again for commenting. I really appreciate it. I hope you will still be able to enjoy my writing and continue to read the future chapters. 😊