Sep 06, 2021
Well, I finally reached here again, I actually started reading this story because of the afterword and title of course. The issue you brought up with breaking the 4th wall through out the novel really intrigued me and my bias towards 4th wall breaking probably pushes me to favor how you wrote the story. This was a story about kohei, he was arrogant selfish crazy and downright stupid. But that is Kohei.
Another thing is, I honestly did not think I was going to fall in love with such a LN-esque story. I honestly came on here looking for more structured stories that were well versed and had depth, (most of all amazing figurative language). Essentially, more novel-esque than LN. But nonetheless you hit so many marks for me. You truly made me enjoy the story for it's liesiure and not trying to sit there analyzing why a tear fell from which eye. It was a great change of pace and I CANNOT stress how amazing your diction was and overall control of my emotions. When you wanted me laughing, you had me laughing, and when you wanted me to feel the feels...well you had me feeling the feels. Lets not forget the..."relief" ;)))
Last thing, I have followed you on Instagram and very much so look forward to your progression in this unsure road we call life. I look forward to your growth in writing, your experimentation and everything that makes your writing yours. Thank you for allowing me to spend a whole day just reading your LN, thank you :,) it was well worth skipping studying!
