Jan 10, 2022
To:ArufaBeta
Yeah, I think that the build-up and sort of eerie feel you kept were perfect, especially with the way Murry and Niko acted when they felt off about the meat and then finding out about the meat. The only thing I would probably say is that their reaction sort of left me confused, like everyone just returned to normal after having eaten a human. Even though from a development point it kind of shows the loss of humanity everyone is experiencing from Han Hito--if that was what you were trying to convey. Besides their reactions the suspense that was built and the way Chloe acted were amazing.