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Pearlyn.M

Find me on my Instagram, Pearlyn.M where I make reels, stories, and appreciate art!
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Winner of MAL x Honeyfeed 2021 with my novel, Realm Assassin.

registered at: Jul 04, 2021

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Dec 11, 2021

To:KingNoran

Glad you like it ^u^

I'm Thinking Out Loud & I Can't Stop

Chapter:1

Dec 10, 2021

To:gremnda

No you!! You amaze me too! >w<

I'm Thinking Out Loud & I Can't Stop

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Dec 10, 2021

To:flameball918

Thank you so much! < 3 I always like to write stories with a twist after all! Albeit this style is a bit different but I enjoyed it ^u^ Glad you like!

I'm Thinking Out Loud & I Can't Stop

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Dec 10, 2021

To:Bubbles

Bubs?

BUBS!

I am now happy Porl.

I'm Thinking Out Loud & I Can't Stop

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Dec 10, 2021

To:ArufaBeta

Aaaaaaah TYSM for your kind words I’m now a mashed potato QuQ In all honesty I did have fun writing this story so it’s nice to know that you enjoyed it!

Ironically I read the last part as a news article but after a few minutes I told myself it passes for a news report too xD to each their own interpretation!

I'm Thinking Out Loud & I Can't Stop

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Dec 09, 2021

I read the synopsis and immediately caught interest, so with the remaining consciousness I have before my soul forces my eyes shut, I’m here reading what looks to be a very nice set up to the characters and their interactions.

Will say I love how they communicate to each other. Your descriptions are nice but I’d be careful with the punctuation errors. Caught a lot of missing periods, comma clauses, and missing commas for the dialogue. However this didn’t take the story away.

I love the phone scene; that tension was great and because I read the synopsis I was expecting her to call herself, so it was brilliantly revealed and the reactions that came after was nice. ^u^

Also Anna. I like her xD I too want the suffering to stop!

On The Line

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Dec 09, 2021

To:Deleted User

Thank you so much Blip! ^u^ Nice to hear that you enjoyed it! And yes, it’s supposed to be one of those “what’s happening” kind of moment, before the truth hits you in the face. Glad you’re scared!

Lol jk please don’t take that serious please I-

I'm Thinking Out Loud & I Can't Stop

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Dec 09, 2021

To:Henry Zhang

Be the best clown you can be 🤡

I'm Thinking Out Loud & I Can't Stop

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Dec 09, 2021

To:Hayato Shinohara

That’s quite true actually! Hard to side with someone in the story as neighbors become bystanders, parents become abusers and the victim becomes a killer. Glad it hits hard though, I love writing a trigger warning xD

I'm Thinking Out Loud & I Can't Stop

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Dec 09, 2021

To:otkrlj

Daaaaaaaamn!

I'm Thinking Out Loud & I Can't Stop

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Dec 09, 2021

To:Pike

TYSM Pik I appreciate you >w<

I'm Thinking Out Loud & I Can't Stop

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Dec 09, 2021

To:Deleted User

Thank you so much >w< Really glad you liked it!

I'm Thinking Out Loud & I Can't Stop

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Dec 09, 2021

To:ALTaccounti

I’m so honored! I got verified <3

I'm Thinking Out Loud & I Can't Stop

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Dec 09, 2021

That weather is sus and so are those lightning strikes-

A Perfect Life

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Dec 09, 2021

Interesting set up of what seemingly is a family with a little girl being ready for Christmas, and now we are going into a tale of a new journey…rather an ominous set up, looking forward to see what happened next 😶

A Perfect Life

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