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Jul 29, 2021
To:Bubbles
I wish I had gotten this criticism sooner tbh. Not that I'm blaming you (moreso blaming myself for overlooking such a cheap execution), but as of right now, it's heading in a direction that might've been better in hindsight had I fleshed out the prologue a bit differently according to your critique. Thank you for your feedback nonetheless.
Jul 25, 2021
To:Deleted User
Honestly, I'm a big fan of your two works so far. For you to give me such a generous score feels really gratifying. I'll get to work on the expositions, and properly flesh out everything else that comes after.
Jul 24, 2021
To:XanNex
Kinda just writing it on the spot atm, but I'll make it good :)
Jul 10, 2021
To:SirPuddinlot
I can def see it improving from here though. gl hf.
Feels kind of like a generic start, but at least it wasn't a truck this time lol.
Jul 06, 2021
I hope to measure up well to your expectations!
A short chapter, yet engaging nonetheless. I can see it going far once the characters and world are more well established.