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Here to share some strange ideas from the depths of my mind. Follow my twitter for chapter updates.
What is an Achievement?
Aug 03, 2021
To:Diggentein
That's a good idea, I didn't think of those when I was writing. Thanks for the comment!
Jul 31, 2021
Glad you noticed the emphasis on sound, ill try not to disappoint in the next chapter (releasing tomorrow or Monday).
Jul 29, 2021
Dissed Comic Sans, smh.
To:Bentknee
I agree, it is a little stuttering but by the end of the chapter it pulled itself together and made me interested at what may come next.
To:Syed Al Wasee
I'll do my best to get better as a writer, ill definitely check your novel out!
Jul 07, 2021
To:Rentaro
No problem! Keep up the good work!
I like your story so far, I would recommend adding some more clues as to how the characters are feeling in any given situation, so that people can get some idea of how they react to a given situation.