Jul 12, 2021
Amazingly written chapter. It was sad to see the guy getting readjusted to his old world. To think that the memories that he made in his past life were nothing but fantasy here is just...
Just saying but I felt like you should've spaced the paragraphs out more in the start. Its a bit long like this. But its only in the starting 2-3 psras so I suggest spacing them out so it would be better.
Other than that i find no other issues to comment on. You did an amazing job. Gambare! 👍
