Jun 24, 2023
To:Natius
Thanks for taking your time for writing all that!
The blocky structure problem is something I've been realizing lately, not so much because of the paragraphs but rather the amount of continuous short phrases stacked together. I'm right now practicing my writing both inside and outside this entry, so I'm working on it.
As for the character introduction, this is not a just-romance entry, and will have a lot of important moments happening through their friends. That's why I'm planning to release information moderately, just giving you an initial idea and letting you figure it out as you advance.
I don't understand what you mean with being in the stadium though. My guess is that you confused the atmosphere I initially described when I said "the passionate stadium atmosphere". It's metaphoric, but still thanks for pointing it out.
