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Huracán, Argentina, Writing, in that order. Aiming to write the first latin-american novel in Japan. If you smiled while reading my works, I won 😊 Find me on Instagram! @shuloxwrites
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Jun 23, 2023
To:Katsuhito
I love your comments, you truly understand my football vision 😆 just wait, redemption will be coming!
To:Kaisei
Get ready for much more then! Thanks for your comment!
That's the most expensive gift for an almost random girl ever, Haru is going to have to take credit for that. Also yeaah, Daichi is soccer player, like him a lot. Penguin scene was so cute
Probably not what Grace expected, definitely not what I expected, truly delighted
I would have craved for that megaphone scene 😆
To:ryba
Then you will enjoy what's coming 🤭
Jun 22, 2023
To:minatika
You are going to put me in a tight spot when I have to choose a team for Mia's hand, and I don't want to let the other one down 😭 but that happens when both characters are great, just hoping the loser doesn't have his heart too broken
Oh how lovely, he wants to find the cute voice! hope he has luck!
To:Feristah
Thanks a lot for your feedback and also for your extended comment! You will never disturb me, in fact I loved reading people that likes my work. I try to maintain a descriptive narration, where it is sports or ambience or feelings, though I'm sometimes limited by the chapter word recommended limit. I'm glad you liked that. I understand you, so I'll make a list of the only relevant names: Takashi Ueda --> MC Jun Nakamura --> Best Friend 1 Hiroshi Nakata --> Best Friend 2 Coach Shiraito --> Coach (duh) Kenjiro Watanabe --> Captain and best player
The rest of names are just filling or less-relevant characters.
Sergio Ramos? He was prime Pepe there, about to jump and kick his face 😆
I'm really enjoying your story, and I'm glad other writers enjoy mine too. Hoping to see more!
To:Kitsune
I call it hand-egg too 😆 never played but seems fun
Books, anime, novels and football, Haruki was being literally me, but then she said GIRLS HAHAHAHAHA father-san was about to destroy our poor guy 😭 AND THEN HE STOOD UP TO HIM, I WAS LITERALLY CELEBRATING. Amazing chapter!
Thanks a lot! I took advantage of the fact that as long as the narration is focused on the ML, it could be omniscient. I'm much better at writing in 3rd person, I feel it gives more freedom
Wow so many happened here! So our boy Toren will be Jun's rival, I was not expecting that AT ALL. Too bad they get segregated, how in the world would someone not appreciate a cat boy? 😡
Also poor Jun, he feels guilty now 😭 I feel it for him, hope he can somehow fix this situation
You are just pampering yourself by praising the foxes 😆
That's nice to hear. I personally think football has a ton of beautiful principles and values so beautiful that it's nice to grow up with it, despite some violent moments that happen everywhere. Still, you played football like ⚽ or like 🏈?
