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Sep 19, 2021

To:Deleted User

That's cool. I haven't watched Power Puff Girls in a long time, but I was always a fan of narrators that have a character of their own. Especially the "lemony" kind.

Former Magical Girls and their Daily Lives

Chapter:2

Sep 19, 2021

To:Deleted User

Thank you for reading!
About the suggestion, I think you have a point there, but I don't want to edit anything because I'll rather let the story be.

Former Magical Girls and their Daily Lives

Chapter:1

Aug 26, 2021

To:jadeblade10

I guess I had perfect timing by complete accident. I noticed that you published right after I did.

Former Magical Girls and their Daily Lives

Chapter:34

Aug 25, 2021

To:Ayesha

Thank you for reading! You have a nice profile picture.

Former Magical Girls and their Daily Lives

Chapter:5

Aug 17, 2021

To:JadeWatch

Thank you! That line is one of my favorites too, and I'm always trying to surpass that one.

Former Magical Girls and their Daily Lives

Chapter:1

Aug 15, 2021

To:jadeblade10

Thanks for the feedback! I had the paragraphs single spaced because that's how normal books look like, but I guess webnovels follow a different set of rules. (It's an easy fix anyway.)
Also, about this being a "comfort novel", that's interesting. My mom said the same thing about my novel. I wonder how you feel about the dream chapter. It was relatively dark.

Former Magical Girls and their Daily Lives

Chapter:24

Aug 14, 2021

To:JustABurningMemory

Thanks for reading, but I noticed that you have prompts for the Mal/Honeyfeed Contest, and you aren't allowed to post your novel on other websites or have multiple prompts.

Former Magical Girls and their Daily Lives

Chapter:1

Aug 14, 2021

To:Deleted User

Good to know. I'll keep that in mind when I decide to start killing off characters. Lol

Former Magical Girls and their Daily Lives

Chapter:21

Aug 14, 2021

To:giuliaxx

Thank you for reading! I hope I can keep your interest in the story, but if I can't, please tell me where you think I went wrong. That'll be very helpful.
Also, the cover of your novel is cute. I think I'll check it out sometime.

Former Magical Girls and their Daily Lives

Chapter:1

Aug 13, 2021

This may be a matter of taste, but I don't like the plot twists at the end of the chapters. My immediate reaction is bruh, rather than I wonder what happens next. It isn't the plot twists can't work, but it feels very in my face. And since the previous plot twist's payoff felt weak (nothing happens because the brother forget about it), I lost confidence of this new plot twist.
I think a good place to look for inspirational would be Odd Taxi. That anime really worked for me when it came to plot twists.

BLOODY BAT ROMEO

Chapter:2

Aug 12, 2021

To:Deleted User

Thanks for reading! Out of curiosity, who's your favorite character?
I'll check out your novel later.

Former Magical Girls and their Daily Lives

Chapter:21

Aug 02, 2021

It looks pretty cool, but I will admit that it's kinda hard to keep track of all of the characters. I do understand that it's hard to make that easy when they pretty much all appeared at once, but I'm overloaded with new characters.

Super-powered Maids Showed Up Out of Nowhere, and Now I Have to Change My Otaku Lifestyle

Chapter:1

Aug 01, 2021

To:3KA

And there's no shame in that. I was just making sure that you are aware of that. Personally, I've been having difficulties with that minimum word count. So, I thought I should tell you.

Daily Life of (a) Summoned Demon

Chapter:2

Jul 31, 2021

To:Yanagi

Sounds cool. I understand your justification for the Ship of Theseus, but I do think that you should make the reason for talking about the heart more obvious. Right after you mention the heart, you go right into talking about thoughts, so it seems weird that you mentioned the heart rather than the brain.

Ephemera Re:Place

Chapter:1

Jul 31, 2021

To:Koumazoku

lol. I guess you should edit that.

Louis Senki • The Tale of Louis (ルイス戦記)

Chapter:4

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