Aug 13, 2021
This may be a matter of taste, but I don't like the plot twists at the end of the chapters. My immediate reaction is bruh, rather than I wonder what happens next. It isn't the plot twists can't work, but it feels very in my face. And since the previous plot twist's payoff felt weak (nothing happens because the brother forget about it), I lost confidence of this new plot twist.
I think a good place to look for inspirational would be Odd Taxi. That anime really worked for me when it came to plot twists.