Sep 01, 2022
So I like the ideas here. Super creative, the ideas and view of hell is super nice I like the lore and I can tell you put time into this.
However, it feels more fantasy, sci-fi. I don’t get any cyberpunk vibes, I feel more sci-fi crime drama. Maybe the more I read it I’ll get the cyberpunk feel the more I read it.
But overall It’s super strong. I love the world you built, it’s super fun.