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Satyr_Online

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Hi, I’m Slater. I write stories that pop in my mind, hope you enjoy.

registered at: Jul 12, 2021

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Jun 05, 2023

I think mentioning real-world things is such a good touch. It makes it feel so real, like I know the nerdcore SoundCloud rappers lmao. I like that touch.

Pigeon on a Power Line

Chapter:1

Sep 07, 2022

To:otkrlj

STOP

Isekai a Isekai

Chapter:1

Sep 07, 2022

Insanity.

Isekai a Isekai

Chapter:1

Sep 02, 2022

As I said I’m not a huge fan of Isakai, but I liked the form he took, it doesn’t screen power fantasy and I appreciate that, hopefully it’ll continue to engage me.

Why Kill? When Witches Can Be Tentacled!

Chapter:2

Sep 01, 2022

So I like the ideas here. Super creative, the ideas and view of hell is super nice I like the lore and I can tell you put time into this.

However, it feels more fantasy, sci-fi. I don’t get any cyberpunk vibes, I feel more sci-fi crime drama. Maybe the more I read it I’ll get the cyberpunk feel the more I read it.

But overall It’s super strong. I love the world you built, it’s super fun.

Welcome to Hell

Chapter:3

Aug 31, 2022

To:Xan Ti

We all do🙏🏾

AKM: AUTOMATED KILLING MACHINES

Chapter:2

Aug 29, 2022

Romana Flowers type beat

Gentleman of the Apocalypse

Chapter:2

Aug 29, 2022

I appreciate how raw it feels, it’s supposed to be antagonistic and bitter. Because honestly that’s how some people feel when they get bad luck. I enjoyed reading this monologue because it felt realistic. It wasn’t meant to get you on her side. She ranted and didn’t care who saw it.

Gentleman of the Apocalypse

Chapter:0

Aug 26, 2022

You definitely have the dialogue and the comedy was good. I love the world and the dynamic of Caramello and Chiffon was definitely unique. Really the only issue I had so far was the fight scenes, but it’s so small compared to the real goal. Like, how would a blow to the shoulder cause to go bleed from a mallet, unless it has some spiked on it. But it’s really good so far

The Wanderblood Princess and Sir Try Hard

Chapter:6

Aug 23, 2022

Really nasty. I love it. You did a good job at making his job sound like shit, literally.

The Arbiter

Chapter:2

Aug 23, 2022

A common man’s story, I like it so far. I like when stories talk about the little guys, but extraordinary people.

The Arbiter

Chapter:1

Aug 22, 2022

You don’t know how much I love Emma. This is super fun, glad I could find time to read this.

Cupid's BLAME!

Chapter:3

Aug 22, 2022

God, it took me back to when I was doing that club thing my freshman year LMAO. I love this, it’s super refreshing to see a college story. Nothing wrong with HS, but I can just relate to this a lot more.

Insurmountable Odds

Chapter:2

Aug 22, 2022

I always like openings that puts in the middle of things, making me figure out some stuff. I can see the beginning of chemistry, I always like it when they don’t get along at first.

Insurmountable Odds

Chapter:1

Aug 22, 2022

The intro is certainly fitting for a rom-com. While the perspective switch was a little jarring, I didn't lose anything. Overall I can't wait to read more. Kept a smile on my face.

I Planted a Girlfriend

Chapter:0

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