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Aug 07, 2021

To:lanca1228

Thank you!!!! I hope you’ll keep reading!

I Failed As a Professional Baseball Player And Now Have To Fight Otherworldly Creatures With Nothing But a Baseball Bat

Chapter:1

Aug 02, 2021

To:Sujin 崇神

Glad you enjoyed🙏I have to catch up on your entry soon too!

I Failed As a Professional Baseball Player And Now Have To Fight Otherworldly Creatures With Nothing But a Baseball Bat

Chapter:7

Jul 30, 2021

To:Bubbles

Thanks Bubbles for all the constructive criticism🙏This is very helpful to be able to look back on as I go forward with my writing so thank you for taking the time to read this and write all the feedback! I'm sorry I can't write a reply worthy of the length and detail of the original comment but just know that I really appreciate it

I Failed As a Professional Baseball Player And Now Have To Fight Otherworldly Creatures With Nothing But a Baseball Bat

Chapter:1

Jul 30, 2021

To:Sevenlock

You're right, I kind of cranked out this chapter quickly since I was on vacation but I will definitely be working on that going forward, I've never written anything this long before so I'm still figuring it out as I go, I hope you'll continue reading too! Thanks a ton for the feedback, it's actually super helpful to hear as I'm writing this.

I Failed As a Professional Baseball Player And Now Have To Fight Otherworldly Creatures With Nothing But a Baseball Bat

Chapter:9

Jul 30, 2021

To:Makech

Thank you haha I wrote this chapter from on top of a bunk bed in Kentucky so I seriously killed my back writing it so I'm glad you appreciate it😂

I Failed As a Professional Baseball Player And Now Have To Fight Otherworldly Creatures With Nothing But a Baseball Bat

Chapter:9

Jul 27, 2021

To:Makech

Thank you so much, I always look forward to seeing your comments on every chapter, they make me so happy😭🙏I’m on vacation for the next few days but as soon as I get back I’ll be giving the newest chapter of Bloody Bat Romeo a read as well

I Failed As a Professional Baseball Player And Now Have To Fight Otherworldly Creatures With Nothing But a Baseball Bat

Chapter:8

Jul 25, 2021

To:Makech

This man just want an apartment with hot water😭free my man

I Failed As a Professional Baseball Player And Now Have To Fight Otherworldly Creatures With Nothing But a Baseball Bat

Chapter:7

Jul 25, 2021

To:Ataga Corliss

That’s awesome to hear!! Thank you, I’ve found myself really enjoying writing the surreal parts more than anything else so it’ll definitely be something I continue to play around with going forward!

I Failed As a Professional Baseball Player And Now Have To Fight Otherworldly Creatures With Nothing But a Baseball Bat

Chapter:5

Jul 24, 2021

To:kazesenken

That’s awesome!! I was just looking through names of flowers and that one really popped out to me

I Failed As a Professional Baseball Player And Now Have To Fight Otherworldly Creatures With Nothing But a Baseball Bat

Chapter:5

Jul 24, 2021

To:kazesenken

Yeah haha I don’t know I think maybe I’m trying to characterize Chrys as a firecracker who has wide ranging mood swings and can go from flirting to wanting to kill somebody but tries her best to maintain a gentle nature most of the time

I Failed As a Professional Baseball Player And Now Have To Fight Otherworldly Creatures With Nothing But a Baseball Bat

Chapter:6

Jul 24, 2021

To:kazesenken

Is that in the other novel you wrote that’s also on webnovel?? That’s actually such an insane coincidence that we both had characters named Chrysanthemum if so because I’ve never read that

I Failed As a Professional Baseball Player And Now Have To Fight Otherworldly Creatures With Nothing But a Baseball Bat

Chapter:5

Jul 24, 2021

To:kazesenken

This was my first time writing action so that’s actually a super helpful suggestion, I’ll try and do better with that next time I write an action sequence and yeah characterizing Chrys is also something I’m trying to feel out as I go since it’s my first time really writing anything

I Failed As a Professional Baseball Player And Now Have To Fight Otherworldly Creatures With Nothing But a Baseball Bat

Chapter:4

Jul 24, 2021

To:kazesenken

Yeah you’re right, characterization through dialogue is something I struggle with a bit so I’m going to try and fix that going forward

I Failed As a Professional Baseball Player And Now Have To Fight Otherworldly Creatures With Nothing But a Baseball Bat

Chapter:3

Jul 24, 2021

To:kazesenken

Yeah there’s definitely something amiss, I was still figuring out but I think I’m trying to lean into the unsettling atmosphere on top of the story

I Failed As a Professional Baseball Player And Now Have To Fight Otherworldly Creatures With Nothing But a Baseball Bat

Chapter:2

Jul 24, 2021

To:kazesenken

Thank you! That’s what I was going for since the weird individual quirks are what make us human y’know and haha I might be the same way

I Failed As a Professional Baseball Player And Now Have To Fight Otherworldly Creatures With Nothing But a Baseball Bat

Chapter:1

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