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Jul 18, 2021
George is the best protagonist in fiction writing history
George better have a chapter later on from his perspective, this man is secretly a genius battle tactician in disguise and I know it
“A madman who had his balls crushed by a falling potted plant”😂😂😂fantastic
Jul 17, 2021
To:Makech
I know, if I'm not careful I'm worried that this all might start bleeding into my own reality lol
These comments absolutely make my day😭thank you, chapter 4 should be getting published late tomorrow so I hope that you'll give it a read🙏
Haha yes, I'm still deciding what the heck the lemur man even is or represents but I'm planning on figuring it out later in the story
Thank you so much! I read a lot of Murakami and I love the way that his stories all seem sort of dream-like and eerie while still being interesting so I’m really glad you liked it😭🙏
I like the move of making the protagonist someone cocky needing to learn humility rather than the prototypical MC, only thing I would suggest going forward is a Save the Cat moment, we need him to do something that endears him to us because we can only relate to being angry at the world for so long, I’ll definitely be keeping up with this story though because I do really enjoy the concept!!
To:sujinphilip
I’ve already got it all written up so I’m super excited to do some final edits, publish it, and see what you think❤️🙏
That opening paragraph that read like a poem was fantastic, had me committed to the story before I even met a character
Poor Kappore thug, my man’s got leaked
JoJo stay getting disrespected😭
Franz is such a perfect name for someone as annoying as this dude, idk why but it fits
I can’t believe I’m just now reading through my baseball bat comrade’s story, this is such a fun read that I can’t believe I put it off until now, one of my favorite reads on this entire website
Jul 16, 2021
Let’s goooo baseball bat gang