Jul 31, 2022
It's hard to characterize him more neutrally while also applying Ashley's view of him lol
Sep 04, 2021
Thank you for giving it a try, I'll keep your views in mind for the future (although, I will say that the last three normal chapters were already designed with a much faster and lighter reading experience in mind).
Sep 03, 2021
Thank you! I was hoping to make the prologue stand out and also lay a lot of the ground work for the setting.
Aug 30, 2021
Thanks for reading my work, I hope you continue to enjoy it!
I'm still working on cutting my paragraphs down as it's a feature of the WN format I'm not used to. You should see the huge blocks in my rough drafts before I take the hatchet to them lol
Aug 26, 2021
"500 people were corrected from the feeling of confusion"
Such a chilling statement. I really like the way you've developed the Feelings Factory stuff.
Aug 26, 2021
"There is a high chance for you to hate the answers you will get."
The eternal dilemma, is it worse to remain stuck wondering or to figure out a rotten answer.
Aug 25, 2021
Thanks for reading, I'm glad you liked it!
Aug 20, 2021
Wrenching description of guilt/anguish, great job!
Aug 18, 2021
Thank you, I'm still adapting to the WN format as opposed to my "traditional" training from college.
Aug 16, 2021
Such nice (or not so nice) descriptive language really draws you into the scene.
Jul 29, 2021
Thanks, I hope it continues to interest you