Jul 15, 2021
"The royals sure did know where to place their priorities," is such a good line. It genuinely made me smile. Using the fruits to give an idea of the kind of environment this takes place was cool too. That aside, I know it was explained in the synopsis, but I don't believe you really explained what exactly Poppy is here. I'm sure it'll come along, but I just thought I'd point it out just in case lol. I'm also curious as to why the castle is so empty. I mean, surely they built it with that many rooms because they were initially planning on using them, right? I'll go on to read the second chapter.