Sep 08, 2023
To:minatika
Thank you so much for reading, I really enjoyed your comments throughout. I'm also really glad you liked Nikita I was really worried about how she was going to come across as she has a lot to deal with that Jace just doesn't even consider before diving into relationships that ultimately affect her in majorly negative ways. Momoka put her in an impossible situation.
As for edits, I think I need to make the tone a little more dark at the beginning with more focus on the Myth Hunters and demons but I'm taking a bit of a break from the story for now at least.
As for a sequel, I don't really have one planned, this story actually exists as a backstory for Jace (and the other Phoenix crew in a way) so maybe I'll write something that includes them later down the line. This story actually exists in the same world as the first novel I published here on Honeyfeed for a previous contest and Jace ends up at the school that one is about.
As for Zebe, well.... Jace is always wondering.
In terms of the contest maybe Jace and Zebe's one is the true wholesome one even though it has a tradegic ending