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Aug 17, 2022

To:leafbladie

Sabrina: too hyperfixated on her crush to notice/care if it's reciprocated yet, lol.

The Love Triangle Between Me, The Class President, & The Spirit Possessing Me

Chapter:19

Aug 17, 2022

To:leafbladie

Teenage me would've started crying so props to Clark for being a tough little soldier, honestly.

The Love Triangle Between Me, The Class President, & The Spirit Possessing Me

Chapter:21

Aug 05, 2022

To:leafbladie

Or standing directly inside him... *rimshot*

The Love Triangle Between Me, The Class President, & The Spirit Possessing Me

Chapter:18

Jul 25, 2022

To:leafbladie

He should have just named them all like episodes of Friends. "That One With the Bird," "The One With the Heart." Really get ahead of that detached 90s irony.

The Love Triangle Between Me, The Class President, & The Spirit Possessing Me

Chapter:12

Jul 25, 2022

To:saltwaterflower

Aaaaaah, thank you!!!! This whole project is pretty terrifying, because this is all very off brand for me? It's been a fun shake-up, but I'm very much leaning on my beta for constant "is this anything?" sanity checks, haha.

The Love Triangle Between Me, The Class President, & The Spirit Possessing Me

Chapter:1

Jul 22, 2022

To:tanktrilby

Thank you! I hope you enjoy the rest!

The Love Triangle Between Me, The Class President, & The Spirit Possessing Me

Chapter:1

Jul 18, 2022

To:leafbladie

She's having quite a day, for sure! It's not just Clark having to adjust.

The Love Triangle Between Me, The Class President, & The Spirit Possessing Me

Chapter:7

Jul 18, 2022

To:ALFOTI

Thank you for reading! Please don't get motion sickness on the bus! ^^;

The Love Triangle Between Me, The Class President, & The Spirit Possessing Me

Chapter:2

Jul 11, 2022

To:VeeValory

Thanks, Vee! I'm never sure when something's funny or corny, so I'm glad this one landed.

The Love Triangle Between Me, The Class President, & The Spirit Possessing Me

Chapter:6

Jul 11, 2022

To:ALFOTI

Thank you!!! That's so encouraging to hear. :)

The Love Triangle Between Me, The Class President, & The Spirit Possessing Me

Chapter:1

Jul 11, 2022

To:salstini

Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it.

The Love Triangle Between Me, The Class President, & The Spirit Possessing Me

Chapter:1

Jul 04, 2022

To:Malicemuffin

Thank you for reading! Humor is so intimidating for me to write, so I'm glad it worked for you so far!

The Love Triangle Between Me, The Class President, & The Spirit Possessing Me

Chapter:1

Jul 04, 2022

To:VeeValory

Thanks for taking the time to give such detailed feedback! This is way outside my usual wheelhouse, too, so I appreciate it.

You've hit the nail on the head with the "too economical" part, I think. Trying to hit that balance of snappy and to the point without making it skeletal is proving to be a difficult target to hit, especially when I naturally lean toward being too wordy and plodding. As a result, the beginning isn't as strong as I'd like. Definitely some "bonjour, I am le plot-relevant set-piece" going on, haha. I knew YA and middle-grade adjacent format was hard to write, and it's still harder than I thought.

As of today, I'm drafted up to around chapter 11, and trying to relax a bit about word count and let it breathe, since we can go up to 75k. We'll see if that tanks the pacing in the opposite direction! Brevity is the soul of wit, but my brevity needs more practice before it's very witty.

Again, thanks for taking the time to time to read and share your impressions!

The Love Triangle Between Me, The Class President, & The Spirit Possessing Me

Chapter:1

Sep 03, 2021

Aaaaa the ending is so emotional! It's even more so after going through the wringer to get there. Aka's in good hands with her fam, though. <3

If you ever feel the itch to write more Aka stories, I'd love to see more of her. She and the other colors already feel so fleshed out just from the flashbacks you wove into this one. Compelling heroines can be hard to come by, and you've put so much care and thought into her, her motivations, history, and personality, that she really jumps off the page.

Otomaho: Who Said an Adult Can No Longer Be a Magical Girl?!

Chapter:15

Sep 03, 2021

2Spoopy Mode, secrets revealed...! Love the touch of body horror, it adds a certain something to the mahou shoujo flavor that really works well.

Otomaho: Who Said an Adult Can No Longer Be a Magical Girl?!

Chapter:14

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