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Nov 29, 2023

To:K-J-Whitten

Thanks so much! I definitely know about the grammar mistakes too, I’d fix them if I they’d let me 😭

Telling the Bees

Chapter:3

Nov 15, 2023

alright, now that I’ve gotten to this point I have to say I really enjoy the way you structured this. not only does it give the characters a chance to explore the setting, it also gives them plenty of mini-dates to go on over the course of his time there. I think it a a great way to develop the romance in a way that’s natural.

also, I still have VAN VAN VANILLA stuck in my brain so thanks for that

Vibrancy x Vibrancy

Chapter:5

Nov 10, 2023

Thank you for reading! It was definitely a labor of love (and pain haha 😭). I think you already have some good feedback in the notes here alone, and I already have a LOT of ideas (I wish you weren’t allergic but your concerns for how you would fit into this world are certainly compelling lol). I definitely might hit you up in the future! 😂😂😂😂

Telling the Bees

Chapter:18

Nov 10, 2023

To:minatika

The giant bees have like the mildest stings in the world, so even if they could you’d hardly feel it lol

Telling the Bees

Chapter:16

Nov 10, 2023

To:minatika

The Ike WOULD have been a major plot point…but I had no time haha 😭. Also, it’s not obvious in the story, but a lot of the bees leaving after not being told about a death and therefore a lack of prosperity are based on the real life superstitions surrounding this tradition. So whether the bees are actually causing disaster by leaving themselves, or whether the people involved are chasing this effect themselves, is up in the air

Telling the Bees

Chapter:13

Nov 10, 2023

To:minatika

with blueberries it’s one of those weird things like when someone says something smells like strawberrries, when they very obviously don’t smell like that irl 😂

Telling the Bees

Chapter:12

Nov 10, 2023

To:minatika

That certainly would be a cop out if it was just a dream 😭

Telling the Bees

Chapter:10

Nov 10, 2023

To:minatika

There was a mention that someone was taking their place on stage wheel they were getting ready, though it was quick so you might have missed it!

Telling the Bees

Chapter:8

Nov 10, 2023

To:minatika

Aw, shoot, guess I missed one. it’s always tough when you know the name of the character but the MC doesn’t lol

Telling the Bees

Chapter:3

Nov 10, 2023

To:minatika

My goodness, thanks for the response! You’re so organized, I should do that for some of the novels I’m reading myself haha

Telling the Bees

Chapter:1

Nov 08, 2023

To:Steward McOy

Honestly, knowing I’ve improved feels nice to hear. That’s really been the benefit of this contest for me over the years. Don’t even want to see the way I was writing in my year 1 novel lol. Anyways, thanks for your comment, and for reading! The voting phase is the voting phase, so I can only leave my fate in the hands of the people 😂

Telling the Bees

Chapter:18

Nov 08, 2023

To:Steward McOy

They get honey cause they got money 🤑

Telling the Bees

Chapter:17

Nov 08, 2023

To:Naru_Sheny

If you sympathize with him that’s plenty a starting point for me 😚

Telling the Bees

Chapter:1

Nov 07, 2023

To:Steward McOy

I was always kind of worried about that part, so that’s nice to hear, thank you!

Telling the Bees

Chapter:15

Nov 06, 2023

To:Steward McOy

It was bee environmental propaganda all along

Telling the Bees

Chapter:13

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