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Nov 05, 2023

To:Steward McOy

Also forgot to respond to this, but thank you 😭it’s changed a lot from the original draft.

Telling the Bees

Chapter:10

Nov 03, 2023

To:Wina Ru

thank you!

I Wish You Were Dead

Chapter:1

Nov 03, 2023

To:Kitsune

well, maybe tomorrow

I Wish You Were Dead

Chapter:1

Nov 03, 2023

Well, I went with this one for the holiday theme, and it certainly does not feel cheery 🤣 I really enjoy the concept of reliving the night together over and over. In a Christmas setting maybe that wouldn't be so bad. The description of the tree too as like a dead thing I also really enjoyed. I guess all that's left to say now is...Merry Christmas?

The Endless Night

Chapter:1

Nov 03, 2023

Ohhh, I would not want to be a judge for this contest. Flat out would not, could not lol. This was awesome, I love what you did with the supernatural aspects and the tug-of-war and battle between the two. I also like an addition of another character. this really felt like a "sequel" to the events in the song and the short story. Great job!

To Catch A Fallen Heart

Chapter:1

Nov 03, 2023

To:F.C Fondness

Thanks! It was really fun to write second-person for once!

I Wish You Were Dead

Chapter:1

Nov 03, 2023

I also used second person, which I hope is a great minds think alike and all that moment 😭. You used it to great effect, and your prose is lovely. I wonder what you'd think of my novel Telling the Bees, because it's got some similarities in concept. All in all, it wouldn't hurt to lose to you again in this one 🤣

You don't remember her name

Chapter:1

Nov 03, 2023

To:ItWasntMe

Thanks!

I Wish You Were Dead

Chapter:1

Nov 03, 2023

Oh, interesting! I liked the "being a marionette" because of the words of others, that was really cool. Awesome job!

Mannequin's Memories

Chapter:1

Nov 03, 2023

To:Steward McOy

Thank you! It definitely needed it.

Telling the Bees

Chapter:2

Nov 03, 2023

To:Steward McOy

I figured it would be a good moment for him to adopt it 😆

Telling the Bees

Chapter:8

Nov 01, 2023

I don’t think I’ve ever felt bathroom envy before now 😭also wanted to comment that I think you’ve done a really good job of getting into his mindset and kind of vibe by writing this in first person. Not an easy skill, by any means.

Jasmine-scent Dreaming

Chapter:4

Oct 31, 2023

People need to hear that they’re beautiful. People also need to hear that they’re more than beautiful. I think Umi’s circumstances really highlight that. Also, I really enjoyed how they felt an honest connection with each other, even if it wasn’t romantic. Leaves room for that special someone to come!

Jasmine-scent Dreaming

Chapter:3

Oct 31, 2023

You’re doing amazing Yuuma, don’t give up!

Jasmine-scent Dreaming

Chapter:2

Oct 31, 2023

Such a sweetie. dating isn’t easy, I feel his pain

Jasmine-scent Dreaming

Chapter:1

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