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WittyAcorn

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If my novel gets more than ten thousand views, I'll write something embarrassing here.

registered at: Aug 21, 2021

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Sep 14, 2021

It'll be funny if the final ending is the government putting the graduating students of Kitazawa in prison for being dangerous psychopaths.
But a great ending to the first volume, nonetheless. I am in awe.

Why I Write

Chapter:30

Sep 14, 2021

So he's just straight up evil now? I like it.

Why I Write

Chapter:29

Sep 13, 2021

So this is what you meant when you mentioned mind games.

Why I Write

Chapter:24

Sep 13, 2021

This is a really good chapter. This really makes me feel like Kohei is a POS without him doing anything bad per se. You've brought out the dark side of the harem genre quite well. I applaud your genius.

Why I Write

Chapter:18

Sep 13, 2021

That's why I use en dashes with spaces.

Why I Write

Chapter:17

Sep 13, 2021

To:Deleted User

Thank you! Good luck to you too.

The Mildpowered Virgins of Novylion High

Chapter:16

Sep 13, 2021

Minor typo that I think you could correct: 'Jogging to close the distance' instead of 'Jogging to close to the distance'.

Why I Write

Chapter:16

Sep 12, 2021

I can see from the other comments that this chapter's been edited extensively. If only I'd known when this was being published. Must have been awesome, seeing a novel take shape in front of you.

Why I Write

Chapter:13

Sep 12, 2021

To:Joe Gold

Thanks, Golden! It's nothing compared to your idea. Glad you liked the chapter.

The Mildpowered Virgins of Novylion High

Chapter:1

Sep 11, 2021

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Why I Write

Chapter:12

Sep 09, 2021

I bet there's a bunch of foreshadowing in this chapter that I'll have to reread later on to fully appreciate it.
About the stuff about the STD system's existence not leaking to the public because of NDAs... Yeah, something's fishy there, I think.

Why I Write

Chapter:10

Sep 09, 2021

Ah, the plot thickens...

Why I Write

Chapter:9

Sep 09, 2021

To:udhyansh sogani

Thanks!

The Mildpowered Virgins of Novylion High

Chapter:2

Sep 07, 2021

To:udhyansh sogani

Thanks!

The Mildpowered Virgins of Novylion High

Chapter:1

Sep 07, 2021

Hey, isn't this cutting a little close to Bakemonogatari with the coming out of the shower naked situation? Eager to find out if there's a twist.

Great wordplay, as always.

Why I Write

Chapter:6

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