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If my novel gets more than ten thousand views, I'll write something embarrassing here.
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Sep 13, 2021
This is a really good chapter. This really makes me feel like Kohei is a POS without him doing anything bad per se. You've brought out the dark side of the harem genre quite well. I applaud your genius.
That's why I use en dashes with spaces.
To:Deleted User
Thank you! Good luck to you too.
Minor typo that I think you could correct: 'Jogging to close the distance' instead of 'Jogging to close to the distance'.
Sep 12, 2021
I can see from the other comments that this chapter's been edited extensively. If only I'd known when this was being published. Must have been awesome, seeing a novel take shape in front of you.
To:Joe Gold
Thanks, Golden! It's nothing compared to your idea. Glad you liked the chapter.
Sep 11, 2021
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Sep 09, 2021
I bet there's a bunch of foreshadowing in this chapter that I'll have to reread later on to fully appreciate it. About the stuff about the STD system's existence not leaking to the public because of NDAs... Yeah, something's fishy there, I think.
Ah, the plot thickens...
To:udhyansh sogani
Thanks!
Sep 07, 2021
Hey, isn't this cutting a little close to Bakemonogatari with the coming out of the shower naked situation? Eager to find out if there's a twist.
Great wordplay, as always.
Sep 06, 2021
No, not the younglings! 😢
'said Yukimura, sayingly.'
How do you even think of this stuff? 😂😂
Great beginning! This is what a prologue should be like. I guess I have a lot to learn. I really enjoyed the meta aspect of it. And I look forward to Kohei's adventures.