Sep 05, 2021

Hahaha, Natsume and Ayane's interactions are a ton of fun! I wonder what the 'syncing' is, and the suspicious man with the sunglasses...👀

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Sep 05, 2021

the intro worldbuilding is very intriguing! and I'm enjoying the transition into (what seems like) an ordinary school life, while pondering the state of the universe haha! and oh man that ending definitely raises a ton of questions! exciting to see where it goes~~

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Sep 05, 2021

I am very much enjoying how immersive your writing style is, the opening scene feels like watching the game on TV haha. The soliloquy references are a ton of fun, and the Via & his friends dialogue flow very naturally and fun, it was a joy to read!

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Sep 05, 2021

I LOVE the broliloquy...absolutely ingenious I can't get over the title. This chapter gives off such a nostalgic vibe, I adore the line about old friend that share the same hometown, exciting to see where this goes!

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Sep 05, 2021

THE COMEDIC TIMING oh my gosh....poor Kazuma I feel his pain in my very bones 😂

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Sep 05, 2021

ooh, I'm enjoying the prologue very much! the tension and foreshadowing for the worldbuilding is a ton of fun to read, and I'm liking the juxtaposition between the delinquent scene and Kazuma & Emma's first meeting!

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