Aug 28, 2022

To:Kya Hon

ooh, it's kind of at the same pace as it's clicking for Shun, so that's a fun observation :D I'm very happy to hear that about Shun's school life and also your theory 👀👀

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Aug 28, 2022

To:Kya Hon

Thank you so much for the in-depth comment! I'm very glad to hear that about the narration style!

And I also VERY VERY appreciate the critical note, nitpicking is totally fine because it's something only a fresh pair of eyes can pick out, constructive crit is extremely welcome and appreciated so thank you very much for pointing that out! ^^

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Aug 28, 2022

Got a question about everyone's character designs, for fan art purposes! Do you have any additional character design notes for the main four outside of what's already been mentioned in the story? or any particular anime characters you feel bear a resemblance to them? 👀

(I'm sorry for spamming a bajillion comments all at once akjfhldkjas)

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Aug 28, 2022

ohoho so he planned out the WHOLE thing like 50 steps ahead, what a power move ;D

I'd be scared but the three of them kind of deserved it...would Leon have been this crafty if he hadn't been put through all that?

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Aug 28, 2022

OHHH. Fynn is one devious guy! Both of them are one step ahead....who will come out at the top?! 👀

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Aug 28, 2022

Fynn is ruthless! Still very curious as to why he hates Leon so much he's dedicating himself to ruining his life 👀👀👀

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Aug 28, 2022

Fynn will definitely be harder to take down because he won't be caught off guard like the other two! WHY do you hate Leon tho what did he ever do to uuuuuuu DDD;

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Aug 28, 2022

Leon dishing out all the fitting punishments!! Can't believe Anna still went for the seduction tactic, she should've known Leon wouldn't budge ;D

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Aug 28, 2022

Anna thinking naughty thoughts while Leon just wants to destroy her life #justfakecouplethings 😘

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Aug 28, 2022

interesting to see how self-centered all of the "friends" are, Anna is a teensy bit more forgivable than Jack at least for now, but....

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Aug 28, 2022

Leon is terrifying idk if Jack /deserved/ this treatment specifically, but the fact that he had absolutely no remorse even at Leon's mercy is...kinda telling. A fitting punishment for someone like that :D

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Aug 28, 2022

ok aomine (jk jk), definitely interesting to get some Jack POV! I was hoping he wasn't that awful but he reminds me of the exact type of sports person that I dislike and therefore, go get him Leon run his day!!!!

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Aug 28, 2022

oooh a very nice full circle kind of start with Leon getting his memories back! dang they were awful to him, farewell the fake happy school days :'(((

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Aug 28, 2022

ah. that's the worst way to find out ;; and not only were they fooling him, they all hate him ouch! and hmmm that ending, I wonder if that means the past Leon is returning...? 👀

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Aug 28, 2022

past!Leon was so unhinged LOL the current memory-less Leon is like...who the heck are you 😂😂

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