Aug 28, 2022
To:Kya Hon
yeeee the fun stuff begins!
I appreciate your careful eye when it comes to the details, especially because very slowly I'm realizing some plot points may potentially not come up again in the future (*cough Saori's glove cough*) so it's very eye-opening and helpful for when I comb through for final edits!
and ah, a very good question! In terms of in general, because the plot outline said so LOL but I do feel that her motivations here can def be fleshed out a bit more bc it's kind of weak atm with its sole purpose being to move the plot forward. Thank you SO much for your insightful comments, I really, really appreciate it a ton...! 😭❤️
