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Aug 19, 2022

excuse me while I scream a bit bc everything was so fun and the banter was exquisite aND THEN THE LAST LINE HIT ME IN THE EYE LIKE A TRUCK THE EMOTIONAL DAMAGE 😭😭😭😭 ???!!!!!!

Gifted Education Project (GEP)

Chapter:2

Aug 19, 2022

To:Supersession

Ooh, surprisingly, I've never heard of it before! Looking at a summary now and it IS actually quite similar atm down to the "ordinary MC does martial arts" AHAHAHA

Our School is Perfectly Ordinary

Chapter:4

Aug 15, 2022

Returning a comment to support! The start is definitely very intriguing, lots of mysteries surrounding the "mentor" :0 the school seems quite interesting too with the different divisions! Will read more after the contest deadline due to time constraints ☺️

Good Luck in the Golden Classroom: The Golden Waltz

Chapter:1

Aug 15, 2022

To:writingoreo

He does have some issues! Though that's not exactly what I'm trying to convey, but hopefully it'll be more clear in the upcoming chapters---and it's also spoiled in the synopsis haha c:

Our School is Perfectly Ordinary

Chapter:2

Aug 15, 2022

To:Supersession

Thank you!! I'm so glad to hear that!! ☺️

Our School is Perfectly Ordinary

Chapter:2

Aug 15, 2022

dropping off a comment to support! I'm loving the banter, Erica is such a gem (RIP Darren), and it's a fun intro for a very interesting premise! Will read more after the contest deadline due to time constraints akjhdflkas

Gifted Education Project (GEP)

Chapter:0

Aug 15, 2022

To:Supersession

LOL OMG. one cannot hide from their roots 😱

Our School is Perfectly Ordinary

Chapter:1

Sep 10, 2021

ahhh I really love how down-to-earth this whole novel is so far, just lovely slice of life shenanigans with the boy. It feels like a true "slice" of their life and a good time throughout, interspersed with a coming of age feeling and a ton of outdoorsy facts! It's definitely an enjoyable read so far and the flow of the dialogue and Via's musings - it all feels so authentic and nostalgic and raw. excited to continue reading their road trip adventures! :D

Road Trip with The Boys

Chapter:6

Sep 05, 2021

OHH a memory!! giving us some insight on Sehyun's character and why Lev wants to find him so badly~ I'm so glad Lev has someone to rely on in such a scary situation! the writing is as fluid and immersive as always and I love the action sequences! Astri's dialogue with Lev is fun to read and man Lev is very stubborn!

UnCrowned

Chapter:2

Sep 05, 2021

Oh man, this chapter definitely hooked me in immediately, I love the way you set the tone and the subtle worldbuilding in the dialogue and descriptions! I also love the way you weave in physical descriptions - esp Lev's mask! it makes me very curious as to what it means and why he wears it. The dialogue and action too are very well done! I hope Lev is okay...omg....literally jumped in there with no hesitation, I could feel his pain (both emotionally and also getting stabbed a ton yikes). This is such an incredible intro! exciting to see where it goes!

UnCrowned

Chapter:1

Sep 05, 2021

Nagata Koichi is such a nice guy! the storm must've been terrifying and based on the title I'm assuming she doesn't have a place to go so it's very sweet of him to offer her a place to stay~ I wonder what the girl's circumstances are...?

I Found A Homeless Girl

Chapter:2

Sep 05, 2021

ooh a nice intro! it must've been such a surprise to go home from picking up food for dinner and suddenly running into a girl crying in the rain, I hope she is ok! 🙏

I Found A Homeless Girl

Chapter:1

Sep 05, 2021

Hahaha, Natsume and Ayane's interactions are a ton of fun! I wonder what the 'syncing' is, and the suspicious man with the sunglasses...👀

Crimson Soul

Chapter:2

Sep 05, 2021

the intro worldbuilding is very intriguing! and I'm enjoying the transition into (what seems like) an ordinary school life, while pondering the state of the universe haha! and oh man that ending definitely raises a ton of questions! exciting to see where it goes~~

Crimson Soul

Chapter:1

Sep 05, 2021

I am very much enjoying how immersive your writing style is, the opening scene feels like watching the game on TV haha. The soliloquy references are a ton of fun, and the Via & his friends dialogue flow very naturally and fun, it was a joy to read!

Road Trip with The Boys

Chapter:1

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