Jul 19, 2022

This voice it sounded light and gentle... But not like it belonged to a girl. It was... a guy! 😂
Now we have all the charcters we need 😂😂

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Jul 19, 2022

She is a criminal. She is a criminal... is she really?😂😂
The moment where the story took a new direction

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Jul 19, 2022

I seriously didn't see that coming😂😂

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Jul 19, 2022

As a fellow programmer... I love this novel!!

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Jul 19, 2022

To:Kyoshiro

Yeah... I am not sure about Akira... But Kazuto will definetly get his chance in the future chapters 😀
Thanks for the advice...

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Jul 19, 2022

To:Deleted User

Thank you 😍
I really want Shinji to live a bit maybe untill I finish this novel 😅

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Jul 19, 2022

To:Natsuki

It looks like everyone wants Shinji to die asap... 😂😂
I believe that if Shinji had to wait more than a minute they would've probably used his dagger or any knife that was there..
Knives aren't like guns, they have different uses other than committing crimes and harming people.
So, it is safe to assume that they had knives.
But since they captured him for a short period they didn't have the time to use it.
Not to mention that Shinji would definitely try to resist them...
In the end whether they used a weapon or not, help was going to arrive very soon.
That was the plan of Shinji: " Getting all the attention of the enemy and trying to survive until help arrives"

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Jul 19, 2022

To:Deleted User

Thanks for the advice😍

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Jul 19, 2022

To:Deleted User

I did some modifications...
I think now the situation is more explained.
Enjoy🤗

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Jul 19, 2022

To:Deleted User

They were in a situation of:
If they point the gun towards Shinji then they can't use Rin as a hostage
BTW they have EMP guns but only one normal
I know it sounds a bit illogic but since guns became useless none uses them...

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Jul 19, 2022

To:Deleted User

That was only for one minute
It would be strange if they decided to kill him immediately

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Jul 18, 2022

I am not sure... But it felt to me that Kazuto, Rintaro, and Akira didn't get any chance to shine as charcters up untill now.
Even when I read the story I can't get a clear image of them.
I think this problem may be fixed in the next chapters..
Anyway I hope you enjoy the chapter😊

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Jul 17, 2022

Third isn't that bad...
Well, personaly, like any human, I like first place so... I kind of understand.😅

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Jul 16, 2022

To:Deleted User

That's what i am plannig for the time being.
Thank you for reading❤️

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Jul 16, 2022

Amazing!!!
I will be waiting for your next novel 😍

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