Jul 27, 2022
Hello again guys!!
Finally, it’s holydays for me!
No study, no work! I am free!
I have more time to spend reading other entries and writing better quality chapters.
What do you think about the new chapter? I changed my writing style a bit! I hope you like it!
Also, I finally made the proper changes on 6 other chapters:
Chapter “Rin” and “Cheap copy version”: Changed all the -dialogue with “dialogue” and made the necessary changes for that.
Prologue and Chapters “Year 2078” part 1, 2, and 3 got a revamp ( I have always wanted to use that word 😂)
- Changes in the titles
- Less dates: this is a story not history class😂
- No more -dialogue: fully changed to “dialogue”
- Added a short monologue to the prologue to ensure more coherence when passing from the part “The world in 50 years” to “The last strike”
- Changes on some dialogues that were far from the reality. (Especially in the prologue)
Check them and tell me what you think.
The rest of the chapters will receive the proper changes in the near future.
Stay safe and thank you for reading.
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