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Jul 24, 2022

To:Katsuhito

You won't believe me if I said this the first time I hear that there is a resemblance.
Now that I think about it there a lot of common points in the next chapters 😂

The Dusk of Revenge

Chapter:2

Jul 24, 2022

To:Katsuhito

Thank you 😍

The Dusk of Revenge

Chapter:1

Jul 24, 2022

To:Xiellion

It has the vibes of a tsundere 😂

Gentleman of the Apocalypse

Chapter:0

Jul 24, 2022

"Frustratingly cute idiot "!!! 😂
That end of the monologue was definitely funny 😅

Gentleman of the Apocalypse

Chapter:0

Jul 24, 2022

Good start for a fantasy novel... I liked it.
I am waiting to see what will happen.
Keep it up😁

(Un)heroic

Chapter:1

Jul 24, 2022

Mayu social skills are over the top...
I changed the idea I had about her in the last chapter
Keep up😉

Meanings, Melancholy and Mutually Beneficial

Chapter:7

Jul 23, 2022

To:Deleted User

Thank you 😁

The Dusk of Revenge

Chapter:14

Jul 23, 2022

To:Natsuki

Thank you😍

The Dusk of Revenge

Chapter:4

Jul 23, 2022

To:Xiellion

I think with this changes, everything should be okay😅😅

The Dusk of Revenge

Chapter:2

Jul 23, 2022

To:Deleted User

They considered defeating the enemy as a game...
Rin was looking upset in past two weeks. That's why, he thought of that idea.

The Dusk of Revenge

Chapter:14

Jul 23, 2022

To:Deleted User

Finally i made those changes.
Sorry for taking so long. I completly forgot the whole thing 😅

The Dusk of Revenge

Chapter:2

Jul 23, 2022

Thinking that Rin was depressed, Shinji tried to help her in his way...
Enjoy the chapter and stay safe❤️

The Dusk of Revenge

Chapter:14

Jul 23, 2022

Hello everyone!!
So, I have made some big changes on the first chapters...
The chapter 1: year 2078 ( part 1 ) and the prologue were the major reason.
I added some parts of the chapter YEAR 2078 ( part 1 ) to the prologue since the latter had no meaning or important inforamtion that pushes the reader to move to the other chapters..
I deleted some information that was totally irrelavant. like the names of organization that took responsibility in the nuclear disarmement process.
[ what was I thinking when I wrote that paragraph seriously!!]
some paragraphes of the chapter 1 were moved to chapter 2 and 3 to make the whole thing easier to read and understand.
No changes were made on the story itself. I just changed the order pf paragraphes between the prologue and the whole chapter of Year 2078.
also i changed the synopsis so you can go check.
thank you😍

The Dusk of Revenge

Chapter:14

Jul 23, 2022

To:Mailing

Thank you 😍

The Dusk of Revenge

Chapter:2

Jul 23, 2022

To:Xiellion

I didn't thought that the big paragraph that was in the beginning of this chapter was making it hard for people to read.
Thanks to the advice of Tomoyuki I realized that😅

The Dusk of Revenge

Chapter:3

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