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Aug 03, 2022
I swear this Darpan is hding either a very important secret or an inbelievingly ridiculous one i liked the chapter i smell some major events coming soon 😅 i hope so 😍
To:Kyoshiro
Yes he is acting acting a bit unusual. The boys met three of the old members of the Red Claws so... Yeah they had a bit of difficult time not that they were going to lose or anything it's just the enemy was stronger than usual so they retreated to think.
Aug 02, 2022
To:Ben
Thank you 😍
To:Deleted User
he's trying to be one 😅 i thought it's high time to shake Things a bit to make him get closer to the other members of the squad
I just couldn't jump from the fight outside immediately to the fight inside it without preparing the stage for that but yeah globally that's what I am doing. You try reading a whole chapter with all it's parts to notice the same thing😅
Today i've only changes only on one chapter "This isn't training part1" The other will be uploaded again in the near future. I hope so. Enjoy this chapter! Stay safe and thank you for reading.😍
To:Xiellion
Thank you for the feedback. It wasn't my intention to talk about the past of each member in this chapter in particular... it was just a moment where shinji started thinking about the past before to sleep. The past of each member will detailed in the future. I know that it's a little bit boring but you can tell that it would be a little bit anticlimatic if I made them use some dialogue there... You can feel that after reading the last paragraphs when he starts accusing himself of being useless... It was all a kind of.... uhh....monologue! Anyway i will take that into considerisation and see what I can do. Maybe some changes 😅. Thanks for the advise!
Aug 01, 2022
Wow that is really a long chapter 😅 As long as it is good I don't mind 😂
The first one to discover the answer yes! Thanks you for the feedback😍
Finally I can start reading a novel from the very first chapter!!! This the first time I see someone interrested in Junji Ito😅 Is it because of Uzumaki? Anyway... I liked the chapter. You've really done a good job in the description of the protagonist's appearance, Mayu and the new transfer student. I felt like most of the events were expected in this chapter. Not a bad thing. It's just after reading and watching many animes and manga I started to feel that there is always this transfer student that will make first contact with the protagonist in his first day i school... Everybody loves and I love it so there is no problem 😍 Am i going to read next chapter.? 😅 You bet I will. Continue!!!😍
Thank you Yeah I can't answer that 😂 That would be a huge spoiler!😅😍
Jul 31, 2022
You should wait for the next chapter to know how he did it😅
Due to the explosion that happened in the dome near the store, the pipes of gaz and water were broken.
The building was blown because of gaz leak. It wasn't shinji's doing.😁 He was just expecting the explosion.
To:Natsuki
TOO bad but this chapter had too anime references 😂 One in top paragraph and one in the last paragraph😅
