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Jul 26, 2022

To:Kyoshiro

I guess I kept dancing between the novel genre and the light novel genre. I don't have a full idea on the difference other then the length and basic structure.
But yeah, I will start in the next couple of days making some important changes.
I am relying on you to check them once again 😂

The Dusk of Revenge

Chapter:15

Jul 26, 2022

To:Deleted User

Thank you ❤️
This is really something that I needed to read in the comment section ❤
I'll try my best to live up to your expectations.
I swear I'll make from this novel a better one 😎

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Chapter:15

Jul 26, 2022

Thank you😍
I'll keep improving and try to live up to your expectations 😍

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Chapter:2

Jul 26, 2022

To:NightWriter

Thank you 😍

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Chapter:1

Jul 25, 2022

To:Deleted User

i tried to use " dialogue " but when the conversation gets a bit longer I find my self thrown back to the dashes. I'll fix that..
Thank you for the advice😍

The Dusk of Revenge

Chapter:15

Jul 25, 2022

Guys, what do you think about the whole story up to this point? What need to be modified? As you may know we’ve reached the 30k words mark which means we are nearly halfway!
This chapter is maybe a bit shorter than the others, I apologize for that I didn’t want to make it longer by adding unimportant stuff… I don’t know if I will be able to write the next in the next couple of days, but I will try my best.😉 With more feedbacks I can make the story better although I know that I can’t create something that will be appreciated by everyone, but I will try to live up to your expectations 🤗
Thanks for always reading and commenting😁.
Thanks for the likes too.😁
Stay safe and thank you for reading once again.😁

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Chapter:15

Jul 25, 2022

thank you and good luck😍😍

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Chapter:14

Jul 25, 2022

Do you have a discord account?

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Chapter:25

Jul 25, 2022

To:IceDonut

While being in the middle of the fight he remembered the reason behind everything that happened during all story.
He got hit and fell unconscious..
The conversation he had with his father was something he remembered during the time he was unconscious.
Then he stood up to fight again.
BTW indeed the conversation looks a bit like the one in the chivalry of a failure knight but it's just one sentence 😁

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Chapter:1

Jul 25, 2022

To:IceDonut

The first part was originally in the next chapter but since that chapter was too much crowded with information I moved this part here.
The rest of the world building will be through the next chapters.

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Chapter:1

Jul 25, 2022

To:Xiellion

Yeah that would be better I'll see what I can do.
When I wrote the chapter I didn't find the proper way to make Rin talk since I was planning to dedicate the two next chapters to talk about her.
After reading the next chapter. You may change your mind so please tell me your thoughts.😁

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Chapter:12

Jul 25, 2022

To:Xiellion

Since most of the human have implanted artificial organs. Using guns would be a stupid idea.
In fact only Shinji and his friends can be considered as normal humans
The rest of the squads in the special forces are using artificial organs.
That information was known to the enemy so bringing normal would be a waste...

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Chapter:11

Jul 25, 2022

To:Xiellion

It was necessary to explain some things here since I am gonna need them in the next chapters...
But yeah other than that the story will soon move faster.😁

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Chapter:7

Jul 24, 2022

To:Katsuhito

You won't believe me if I said this the first time I hear that there is a resemblance.
Now that I think about it there a lot of common points in the next chapters 😂

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Chapter:2

Jul 24, 2022

To:Katsuhito

Thank you 😍

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Chapter:1

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