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RadiantDouble96

Aspiring American-Dominican science-fiction writer.

Born in New York, moved to Delaware, and lived surrounded by lots of games and anime.

Creating a new series called “Axem Academy”.

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Nov 09, 2017

Looks this chapter really lived up to its title. You're walking home only to hear a mob. You come up to see what happens, and what do you get? A whole mob executed within moments, and a Renegade. Quite an interesting chapter. Keep up the good work.

By the way, I tried observing here too. Like you said, this takes place after much more than a couple of years, and it seems like Rea is someone to watch out for, but her family too. Although, it seems a little disturbing to see Lucas actually upbeat about a mob attacking a man. Then again, he fights battles to the death on a weekly routine, so, I can't say that was totally unexpected.

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Parable of the Renegades [BETA Version]

Chapter:4

Nov 09, 2017

To:Jio Kurenai

Thanks. I'll be sure to keep analyzing as I go along. Also, an arm and a leg? That's a little...discomforting, to say the least.

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Chapter:3

Nov 09, 2017

Quite a strong development here. Am I to assume that Rea has actually been in a relationship before, with a harsh end? Well, either way, it seems that she's really they're for Lucas...from what I've seen so far anyway. I'm really enjoying this story and how its going.
P.S. Not to be rude, but why do I feel like if Davis saw this moment, he'd be wishing that he and Lucas could trade places in that Jacuzzi?

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Chapter:3

Nov 09, 2017

Also, I have a question. How much time has actually passed since the first Renegade in the story blew up that aircraft? A year? 2 years?

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Chapter:2

Nov 09, 2017

To:Jio Kurenai

Every week, huh? I can see why Lucas wouldn't want to call Dr. Rea "Mom". Sounds pretty turbulent. Either way, pretty interesting moment right here. Well, interesting for Davis, but routine for Lucas. Keep up the good work.

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Chapter:2

Nov 08, 2017

To:Jio Kurenai

Right back at you. Thanks for sharing your thoughts, and keep up the good work! P.S. I think I will enjoy the rest of the story.

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Chapter:1

Nov 08, 2017

Looks like I was right to expect excitement. This story's going to be very intriguing, looking at just this chapter alone.

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Chapter:1

Nov 07, 2017

Pretty interesting story. I can definitely tell that this "Renegade"'s pretty confident, and I can tell that things are going to get crazy here, and very quickly at that. Thank you.

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Chapter:0