Apr 02, 2024
Criminally short, but i believe it fits the type of story. Yet, i think, solely an opinion, that you should make this longer to actually make it an interesting book. It begs a question: would you give up your humanity to find out everything you could possibly know or remain a human to suffer amongst those who are like you to potentially find something? i think this story at least makes you wonder, often leaving you in confusion at what you just read. A very lightly done writing style fits the ambience of the story, almost like you’re reading wind. Anyways, from a fellow reader/writer to another, I hope you keep writing. This was interesting