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Just another writer/reader like you!
Hopefully, one day my writings will become a book that many people come to love and be inspired by.
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Nov 16, 2021
Highly interesting, the dialogue is phenomenal
I like the whole take on the jab of the harem culture, it's quite funny and they all have distinct personalities. It does read like an anime type of text and the dialogue is great. Some lines can get confusing with the placement of it all, but I suspect this being due to its a journal entry of a guy. It reminds me of Oreigaru.
Nov 14, 2021
I’m interested. You’ve done well setting a great theme and allowing the reader to visualize this world. Ambiguous enough to keep reading, but clear enough to understand. Witty character and realistic dialogue and feelings, I’m hopeful to see this continue.
Nov 10, 2021
Read this in one day from a suggested post having signed up today. This was really good and depressing, but expected. In volume 2, I think it would be good for Shiki to truly explore his gender. He seemed much more satisfied being a girl and it suited his personality a lot more. Yuri did drop off a little, but the plot was still interesting. It was predictable, in a good way but also there were some plot twists I enjoyed. If it was me, I'd live with the guilt. I couldn't let someone treat me like that. Him having no self respect led him here and its his own fault. They would be a terrible couple to me LOL good story looking forward to more!
This is very well paced, and I feel like I have an idea of what I WANT to happen vs. what I think will happen. It can't not blow up in this dudes face he's outdone himself this time lmao
just started reading today, it's pretty funny so far. I can only think of how lame this dude is and dudes like these typically believe all girls act like this which is TOTALLY the reason they don't get any, not their attitude. I'm intrigued.
