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Hopefully, one day my writings will become a book that many people come to love and be inspired by.
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Mar 25, 2025
To:Orionless
It’s the actions, like “you’re cute when you’re upset” sort of phrases are definitely out of touch and cringe. But it adds to his delusion bc he thinks it sounds socially adept.
Just sounded like a interesting story and it is. i now will return to the shadows of honeyfeed…
balding is every man's worst fear. the voice has gotten a lot better; he's still cringe but sort of on purpose and it has its own charm in that way. He's awkward, socially inept and overestimates his abilities but it works for him. i hope you keep posting.
i really gotta know why the old lady is helping him out 😭 bro is not a person who you would want to help. It’s always these types of people who need it the most.
Lyra is my fav
i sort of like the underpinnings of societal critiques on homelessness, although i wonder if it can be drowned out by his sardonic nature at times. He’s emotionally distrustful, sarcastic and heaved by his past, that much you can feel. Usually people like this are unlikeable (which he is) but at the very least honest. His callousness isn’t his character rather more of a mechanism to avoid himself. Precisely why the old woman accepts him.
The themes of past errors and pathways that spawn from that are all ones i hope do get explored. The humor shined a bit more in this chapter. The woman is by far the catalyst and heart of the story and it’s also interesting to see what types of relationships develop in unusual circumstances.
So far, it’s interesting
Mar 24, 2025
this was a cute chapter and i think now there is a stronger sense of the limitations they would face in their relationship.
Mar 21, 2025
It’s a difficult answer to give, especially to a random stranger on their own suicide. Hard to know what the right thing to say is. Nice chapter the girl is a good touch to the story.
Mar 20, 2025
To:Slow
incoming: more romance!
definitely wanted to capture the "meta"
Mar 19, 2025
the girl also says 'i'm happy to work for free' but there aren't quotations marks, that's all :0
already love this story. chill, philosophical vibes. i bought a pair of women's pants by accident bc well they looked nice and i was like...what the hell, there's no pockets. It's a scheme, a scheme i tell you!
Mar 15, 2025
existentialism and nsfw? sign me up
i actually like the script format, great start
To:obliviousbushtit
the coyote is on the path to greatness...you shall see!
🥰 they are robot/human combo in heaven or something like that lol
its hard to hate her