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Jun 18, 2023

A man of unbreakable will, to wake up dry after that.

Grace Dances Upon the Clouds

Chapter:7

Jun 18, 2023

Aww, she didn't like the cookies... 😂

I Was Supposed to Kill the Demon Lord, But Instead I Asked Her to Marry Me

Chapter:5

Jun 16, 2023

Sins forgiven.

Grace Dances Upon the Clouds

Chapter:5

Jun 16, 2023

A sin had been committed. Shame on Haru. /s

Grace Dances Upon the Clouds

Chapter:4

Jun 16, 2023

"It was probably not that major." - Did Akihito not realize that Mai tried to commit suicide? Or did he just brush it aside as something trivial?

Ai's Last Wish

Chapter:6

Jun 12, 2023

"Besides, if we keep ending our encounters that way, the readers will quickly get bored of us." - I see he has never heard of Team Rocket. 😂

I Was Supposed to Kill the Demon Lord, But Instead I Asked Her to Marry Me

Chapter:3

Jun 11, 2023

... And then he realized to mine through stone he should have crafted a pickaxe too (unless he had one already).

Also...

"I'm not clapping for you. I'm clapping for the mushroom for putting up with your shit."

K.O. 😂

Maniavolution

Chapter:10

Jun 08, 2023

The day Brexy learns about KFC is the day humanity can kiss their ass goodbye.

Maniavolution

Chapter:8

Jun 08, 2023

The chapter has been pretty nicely improved.

Though there are still some odd sentences, expressions, or a mix of verbs in past and present tense, that make the chapter a little harder to read, but - again - it's an improvement compared to last time.

Would You Paint My Dunk

Chapter:1

Jun 07, 2023

This was a pretty nice chapter.

The only thing I would suggest is some break between the ML recalling the time he met the witch, and them coming face to face with the baker (like an empty line or ***, just as examples)

On the run with a witch from another world

Chapter:2

Jun 07, 2023

So far this novel is very good! I especially love the way the ML speaks and thinks.

Keep up the good work!

Heartstrings and Horns

Chapter:4

Jun 06, 2023

"Dreams end eventually."
Inb4 Haru's parents: "HMM~? Do they~?"

Grace Dances Upon the Clouds

Chapter:2

Jun 06, 2023

It would be nice if you split up that gargantuan paragraph into more, smaller ones, so it becomes a little easier to read and look at.

Otherwise, it's a nice start.

On the Railway Wire

Chapter:1

Jun 05, 2023

To:kazesenken

I was more refering to the vibrant sky, dragons and unicorns, cupcake forests and chocolate fountains, and etc. 😅

Grace Dances Upon the Clouds

Chapter:0

Jun 05, 2023

It's an interesting start. The boy has some... weird? dreams. They felt a little like what one might see in their hallucinations? But ultimately it's still good.

Grace Dances Upon the Clouds

Chapter:0

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