Jul 13, 2023

The descriptions of the photos are amazing! I’m so glad it’s the COVER actually cause I would have defo needed to see it too 😤 congrats again for making it ngl I can stare at it for hours and I’m not exaggerating 😂 okay maybe not hours, my eye would twitch but you get the gist 👌 I already like Ashiya’s character tbh, and I can see myself liking her even more down the line when we get to see more sides of her very interesting personality 🫡 And plus she has a butler. That’s always a plus 😩 double plus in one sentence…
Eager to see more my friend! ❤️

Loading...

Loading...

Loading...

Loading...

Loading...

Loading...

1

Jul 13, 2023

P.S. we need more Jun making silly sound effects and Mia following along 😂😂😂 ONEGAISHIMASU MINA-SAN! 🙏🏻

Loading...

Loading...

Loading...

Loading...

Loading...

Loading...

1

Jul 13, 2023

Aw 🥹 Now I’m imagining Claire dressed as a scientist! I need that figurine somewhere 😤 Also Jun = Minatika?! Overworking themselves?! 🤝 Nah, sorry bad joke 😂🙏🏻
I’m so glad to see Jun relieved that Claire is back, and I’m even more relieved to see CLAIRE BACK myself 🫶🏻 Claire gang stand up, our deity has arrived 🫡 For real tho, there’s something about those “I’m concerned for your wellbeing” scenes that just strike me as wholesome, so I’m especially looking forward to the next chapter!

Loading...

Loading...

Loading...

Loading...

Loading...

Loading...

1

Jul 13, 2023

To:Bubbles

As soon as I saw “THE FEW POSITIVES” I KNEW I was getting hammered 😂😂😂 I’m jumping straight to negatives tho: To be honest all those issues about the narration and descriptions etc has been bugging me for a while now, and I knew I had to cram stuff into the first chapters about characters and who they are just so the reader can get a “footing” in the story and cast, without that necessarily being a good thing. I’ll admit, that was lazy and could have been better 😂 Haruhi being a bad protagonist so far I can get behind as well! He seems too perfect for you to “sympathise” with him (yet), but that’s just his thing up until this point. There is quite some jump to be had here tho, and a mask to crack if you may. 4 Chapters can only tell you so much after all, but I’ll admit he may lack that “hook” to get the reader attached 🤝 All in all don’t know if you’ll be reading the rest (hope you do, but if you don’t I won’t hold it against you) but I aim to develop the characters and show different sides down the road apart from the one dimensional “copies” that they seem to be. Anyways, thanks for the critique Bubbles I appreciate it and I’ll try to improve upon it! ❤️

Loading...

Loading...

Loading...

Loading...

Loading...

Loading...

1

Jul 13, 2023

To:Bubbles

Glad everyone likes the name as much as I like it 😤

Loading...

Loading...

Loading...

Loading...

Loading...

Loading...

0

Jul 13, 2023

To:Bubbles

She actually doesn’t I can confirm 😩

Loading...

Loading...

Loading...

Loading...

Loading...

Loading...

0

Jul 13, 2023

To:Bubbles

Hm? Hm….
Thanks for checking it out Bubuls 🤝

Loading...

Loading...

Loading...

Loading...

Loading...

Loading...

0

Jul 13, 2023

To:ryba

Some fathers smh 😩 That’s how fake boyfriend plan came to be tho 👀
Thanks for reading Ryba! 🫶🏻

Loading...

Loading...

Loading...

Loading...

Loading...

Loading...

1

Jul 13, 2023

To:ryba

Ichika knows how to get what she wants 🤝 Hopefully… maybe 😅

Loading...

Loading...

Loading...

Loading...

Loading...

Loading...

1

Jul 13, 2023

To:ryba

Kotone does what a little sister should do best 😤
Read whenever you want Ryba! I’m juggling several stories + work myself so don’t worry 😅 Haruhi and Co. won’t be going anywhere 🤝

Loading...

Loading...

Loading...

Loading...

Loading...

Loading...

1

Jul 12, 2023

You can’t do this to me Shu where is the rest?! 😭😭😭 I’m literally reading this chapter while STANDING no cap! I was so nervous bro I swear 😭😭😭 It’s within arm’s reach boys! Seize the chance damn it!
Takashi has grown so much dude 🤝 All the inner conflicts turned into hopeful thinking… 👏
Bro that “Nao” in Portuguese tho 😂😂😂😂 And Takachiho players just barely avoiding the grill from their fans 👀
Can’t wait for the next chapter Shu! Vamo Tsunoooo 🤝

Loading...

Loading...

Loading...

Loading...

Loading...

Loading...

1

Jul 12, 2023

MENU-KUN USED EMOJIS
IT'S SUPER EFFECTIVE!
😂😂
Bro I just die laughing whenever I think of him just going 🤔 for hours on end looking deadly serious, just to come up with something so simple 😅 It is pretty impressive nonetheless. Despite that, I believe even THAT may not work 😂 Up next: Hand signs?

Loading...

Loading...

Loading...

Loading...

Loading...

Loading...

1

Jul 12, 2023

To:kazesenken

Let the fujoshi run free 🙏Thanks for reading Kaze! ❤️

Loading...

Loading...

Loading...

Loading...

Loading...

Loading...

0

Jul 12, 2023

To:kazesenken

DANCING OFF THE STAGE = best way to show off your victory... don't know why I didn't add that tbh 😂

Loading...

Loading...

Loading...

Loading...

Loading...

Loading...

0

Jul 12, 2023

To:kazesenken

Learn the truth the hard (?) way 🧐

Loading...

Loading...

Loading...

Loading...

Loading...

Loading...

0