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Dec 30, 2021

This monologue is my pride and joy of creation.

Apathy at Gifted Academy

Chapter:10

Dec 30, 2021

Love the structure and formatting especially the bolded bits

Fade to Black

Chapter:7

Dec 30, 2021

To:KingNoran

Nice

Fade to Black

Chapter:7

Dec 30, 2021

It's interesting, there could be some more prose instead of just dialogue, however.

(BACK!) Project: INFERNO

Chapter:1

Dec 29, 2021

To:Murasaki

Thank you so much! I know I'm probably not the best source of light novel tips but generally, I try to think about my characters as much as possible, finding ways to make connections between them and backstories. I also read a lot of light novels and just think about possible plot points like all the time. Thanks for taking your time to read my novel! :))

Apathy at Gifted Academy

Chapter:8

Dec 29, 2021

I want to be part of the sigma squad

Dance of Thorns

Chapter:0

Dec 29, 2021

One of best novels I've read, surprised this isn't more popular!

✨ Nopan Mahou Shoujo ✨

Chapter:12

Dec 29, 2021

A very good opening chapter, maybe check your spelling, unless 'friut' was intentional... Overall excited to read on! :)

From Assassin to Demon lord

Chapter:0

Dec 29, 2021

It's quite interesting, although you could maybe add some more prose and descriptive language to make it a bit more engaging, I feel like I'm watching a play on a stage. But the story and plot are very good.

Don't Die, Will: Vol 1 (On Hiatus)

Chapter:3

Dec 27, 2021

To:Murasaki

Thanks! I’m hoping to be able to post a new chapter every day.

Apathy at Gifted Academy

Chapter:7

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