Sep 01, 2025
To:obliviousbushtit
I think the start felt faster compared to how it is currently. I think the scene changes in the Prologue sorta contribute to that, but I think there's also a general vibe of 'trying to get to the point of the novel', which is something a lot of stories do.
That said, this could be personal preference speaking since I usually like it when they take a bit more time.