Sep 11, 2025
To:Moe Tie
To be honest I am struggling with these two a lot. I was thinking if I should have a extended sequence for both of them, in which case I'd also probably lengthen the fight so it would read more naturally. I am glad you like the backetory though, alongside the irony of the flower and the poem, it is quite neat that you noticed that. As for the finale I definitely do agree, it could use some extension for sure, on a rewrite I'll definitely have to add more to this chapter! Thank you very much for reading!!!