Jul 20, 2025
Damn, your writing put me to shame 🤣 the fifth scenes were pretty well written and very descriptive. They almost feel mecha genre in a sort of way. I'm curious to know where this will lead. I'm sure he won't be fighting with bots.
I'm liking the main character's personality, his thirst for power and slightly cocky but also self-deprecating attitude. And one of my favourite part have to be the fact he is not even winnings immediately. He wasn't born getting that number one by just existing. He isn't adjusted yet and it's taking him time to get there.
