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Hi! I‘m Nika, nice to read ya!
Feb 12, 2025
The Librarian rats are so cute!
This is so so so so so good!!!!!
Feb 11, 2025
Your story ideas are always just so much fun! I really like this duo, can't waot to see what the scary outside world has to offer them :)
Feb 10, 2025
Oooooooohhhhh this is great!!!! It checks all my boxes!!! Also, what a cute cover!
This is a really fun way to set the mood and introduce everything. Color me intrigued, I'm looking forward to reading more of this!
Feb 06, 2025
To:Shiro
I find writing short stories and longer works to be quite different as well. But I actually finished the first chapter of Wires In Bloom right after this (though I didn't comment yet) and really enjoyed it. I'm just happy I got more stuff to read from you and that I'll be notified when you release new stuff :) thanks for writing!
That cover is awesome! It immediately caught my attention. Your writing also flows really nicely, I have to check out your other work as well now
Feb 03, 2025
I like it when a character has a ton of different names - Shinji, Marcus, Tollia. I like the naming conventions of your goblins in general, Tollia, Pimya, Goba Lanka roll off the tongue nicely. Also Pimya is great in general, 10/10 hopefully nothing bad happens to him
Nov 12, 2024
To:Steward McOy
Thank you so much for reading and commenting, Steward! :) I agree, I could improve the clarity of the premise among other things (and hopefully will, on further edits).
Nov 11, 2024
To:SuperCoolNarutoGuy
Glad I can still surprise you haha
You'll see where the story goes :) thanks for reading!
To:Bendovella
Thank you for your kind words :) I haven't decided on a specific age for Toma, but she is somewhere in her teens - and I hope I can portray that well enough. Thanks for reading!
It's starting!!
To:Stubby1807
Thank you for reading! I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter :)
Oct 25, 2024
Thought about this chapter again today and had to come back. It's great, and I'm really looking forward to where you're taking this! Really well-written and intriguing.