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Hi! I‘m Nika, nice to read ya! (ノ◕ヮ◕)ノ*:・゚✧ I like to write cute stories about magic, friendship and adventure! ( ✿ •̀ ‸ •́ ✿ )
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Nov 11, 2024
To:SuperCoolNarutoGuy
It's starting!!
To:Stubby1807
Thank you for reading! I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter :)
Oct 25, 2024
Thought about this chapter again today and had to come back. It's great, and I'm really looking forward to where you're taking this! Really well-written and intriguing.
Oh no, poor Avery! But another great chapter :)
The story gets more and more intriguing. I really like the interactions between Dorian and his mom, and also with Avery. You really manage to paint a clear picture with them!
Great start - I really like the way your sentences flow, how the worldbuilding and the connections between the people are woven into the story. It really is a joy to read!
To:otkrlj
Thank you for reading! I hope I can keep the comfy vibes strong throughout this little story.
Thank you! I'm happy these things are coming through in my writing.
To:Mech
I'm happy to hear the chapter was comfy for you. That's really the highest compliment I could receive on this piece, so thank you! :)
Oct 23, 2024
A really nice start. A lot of info here, but you manage to package it in an engaging way. Can't wait to learn more about Kaori and read the next chapter :)
Archie is a great addition to the story, I like their interactions :D
I really like the way you write Jiro, and the surreal-dreamy atmosphere you've created. A digital afterlife sounds pretty scary to me, so I'm interested to see where you're going with this idea! It's definitely intriguing.
Thank you for your kind words! Something I really like about the Honeyfeed Contests is that they get me out of my writing comfort zone. I've been wanting to write a cozy story for ages, but never found the time, so I'm excited to see how this one pans out.
To:Shulox
Aaaah, thank you for reading! I'm also glad to see you again, good luck with your entry! I have Anima on top of my reading list, and hope to start it soon :D
To:Kitsune
Thank you for reading and commenting! That's exactly the question that's supposed to be at the heart of the story, and I hope that I'll be able to find one answer with Toma.