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Hi! I‘m Nika, nice to read ya! (ノ◕ヮ◕)ノ*:・゚✧ I like to write cute stories about magic, friendship and adventure! ( ✿ •̀ ‸ •́ ✿ )
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Oct 11, 2023
Amazing. I'll re-read this plenty of times, no doubt. Thank you for writing this beautiful piece!
To:lolitroy
Thank you! It's also my favorite line I've written in this piece :)
To:znf
Thank you so much for reading and leaving such an in-depth reply!
To:chibiandreea
Thank you for reading and leaving such a nice comment! I hadn't noticed the status, I'll change it asap.
Oct 10, 2023
To:Kitsune
Thank you so much for reading and commenting! Introducing Apatheia is my attempt at "expanding" the world of Into the Night / An Invitation from Thanatos, and I just hope that is in line with the prompt. But nevertheless, I really enjoyed writing this piece and reading the contest entries!
To:Jon Spencer
Thank you for reading and leaving such a nice comment!
I really like the direction you took with your piece, exploring the mystery of Thanatos and the main character getting her conclusion. Ending with the evening turning into night really encapsulated those soft feelings for me, and throughout the whole piece I could really feel the atmosphere. Thank you for writing!
I love the way you crafted this story, and the bittersweet feeling that remains. At first I wondered how the first part about Death's many forms connected to the second part, but you tied it wonderfully together. Definitely one of my favorite stories right now!
I love the diary form you used for the piece! You communicated the feelings really well, as well as the personality of the protagonist. I greatly enjoyed reading your story, thank you for writing it!
Great story. A great start, and I especially like the dialogue - I'm just left wondering how Sayuri sounds during the day. It also has a nice, open-ended conclusion. Thank you for writing!
Great story and beautiful cover. The christmas atmosphere was really tangible, and I think you portrayed both characters really well, especially Jinsei. Thank you for writing this beautiful piece.
Beautiful. I like the space setting, and your consistent use of the butterfly imagery - the story feels both sad and light. I really enjoyed reading it!
Nice story! I liked the spooky atmosphere, and especially the scene with her handing the coin to death. Your symbolism was nice and consistent, though I would have wished for a few more instances of you changing up the classic elements (like the image of Death with a cloak and scythe), but all in all, this was a really solid story that I enjoyed :D
To:Funsui
Thank you so much for your comment!
Oct 09, 2023
To:SamSerakawa
I'm really glad you enjoyed my story! Just to clarify: Apatheia and the 'you' in the story are two different people (Apatheia being the main character's 'childhood friend' and 'you' being someone the main character met later in life). Thank you for your lovely comment!