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Hi! I‘m Nika, nice to read ya! (ノ◕ヮ◕)ノ*:・゚✧ I like to write cute stories about magic, friendship and adventure! ( ✿ •̀ ‸ •́ ✿ )
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Oct 23, 2024
A really nice start. A lot of info here, but you manage to package it in an engaging way. Can't wait to learn more about Kaori and read the next chapter :)
Archie is a great addition to the story, I like their interactions :D
I really like the way you write Jiro, and the surreal-dreamy atmosphere you've created. A digital afterlife sounds pretty scary to me, so I'm interested to see where you're going with this idea! It's definitely intriguing.
To:Mech
Thank you for your kind words! Something I really like about the Honeyfeed Contests is that they get me out of my writing comfort zone. I've been wanting to write a cozy story for ages, but never found the time, so I'm excited to see how this one pans out.
To:Shulox
Aaaah, thank you for reading! I'm also glad to see you again, good luck with your entry! I have Anima on top of my reading list, and hope to start it soon :D
To:Kitsune
Thank you for reading and commenting! That's exactly the question that's supposed to be at the heart of the story, and I hope that I'll be able to find one answer with Toma.
Oct 11, 2023
Amazing. I'll re-read this plenty of times, no doubt. Thank you for writing this beautiful piece!
To:lolitroy
Thank you! It's also my favorite line I've written in this piece :)
To:znf
Thank you so much for reading and leaving such an in-depth reply!
To:chibiandreea
Thank you for reading and leaving such a nice comment! I hadn't noticed the status, I'll change it asap.
Oct 10, 2023
Thank you so much for reading and commenting! Introducing Apatheia is my attempt at "expanding" the world of Into the Night / An Invitation from Thanatos, and I just hope that is in line with the prompt. But nevertheless, I really enjoyed writing this piece and reading the contest entries!
To:Jon Spencer
Thank you for reading and leaving such a nice comment!
I really like the direction you took with your piece, exploring the mystery of Thanatos and the main character getting her conclusion. Ending with the evening turning into night really encapsulated those soft feelings for me, and throughout the whole piece I could really feel the atmosphere. Thank you for writing!
I love the way you crafted this story, and the bittersweet feeling that remains. At first I wondered how the first part about Death's many forms connected to the second part, but you tied it wonderfully together. Definitely one of my favorite stories right now!
I love the diary form you used for the piece! You communicated the feelings really well, as well as the personality of the protagonist. I greatly enjoyed reading your story, thank you for writing it!