Jun 02, 2022
To:Fuzzy Rabid Usagi
Sure, I understand about the apartment section that could’ve got more detail.
I also understand about that it’s not that realistic to get a fine and even jailtime. But that is were you made a mistake, the MC knows that its not realistic and doesn’t believe that either that they can do that. The letter has been sent from school by the director that wants to force him to join the school and made up a story like this fine and jail time. So to try to scare and force him in. He knows this but follows through.
The part with the girls, can sound a bit mmm muah. But thats the reason I like the feedback. So I can alter the story and make it the best possible.
Thank you so much for commenting and giving your opinion! i hope you join me in this story all the way! ❤️⚡️🔥