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A bored engineer who wanted to write a little bit as a hobby with the dream of giving up on being an engineer.
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Jun 20, 2022
To:Deleted User
Her clothes. Just thought that since she's basically using pink-only and her hair is pink too, it would make sense to call her a pink-colored girl... Is it too confusing?
Jun 19, 2022
I'll retrospectively work on the other ones, but already trying changing it on the fifth chapter. Thanks as usual.
Too much dialogue and script on this one... The first one might be a problem, but thanks again.
She's a funny lad. Glad you're liking it (working on fixing the script part btw).
So is script a no-go, eh... I really like style of having the characters names right there all the time, but if it's bad for novel then I may fix it. Thanks for the help.
