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Hello.
I write stories.
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Much love.
Jun 12, 2022
To:Deleted User
Hi, thanks a lot for the compliment!! This is actually the first thing I ever wrote in English. As I was convinced that the story has quite some potential I wanted to reach more people. I do have quite some writing experience in German though. I sincerely hope I can make you continue to enjoy this^^
Jun 11, 2022
"she gave a toothy grin while scratching the back of her head after making an aweful excuse" haha know exactly what kind of image you had in your head, so canon. :D I really like your writing style, very appealing to follow the plot. And great world building, the setting seems really lively. Looking forward for more :))
Jun 10, 2022
To:Xiellion
Hey! Thanks for the extensive feedback!! :) My thought process behind it was to make certain things the characters say/actions the characters take more understandable to the reader. For example someone who is used to being bullied is more likely to keep his mouth shut even when being offended. Or someone who is a heartthrob would less likely want to put up with weird stories about AI anime dolls.
But I completely understand where you are coming from. As this is the first thing I'm publishing, its a great learning experience for me to figure out what actually is appealing to the reader and what isnt. So thanks a lot again for the feedback :)
Your cover is the most artistic thing I have seen in a long time 🧐 I predict it to become the next Mona Lisa, admired by the whole world.😜
Jun 09, 2022
To:epicene
Oh that is such a sweet comment!! Really lightens up my mood. Thank you so much 🤗
Jun 05, 2022
To:Beetrix🐝✨
hey thanks a lot for the positive feedback!! I appreciate that a lot :) The cover was drawn by zyuno0. Im going to add that to the notes, credits to those who deserve it. In my mother tongue the dashes are sometimes used to indicate that you are replying to something. I didnt really realize that its not used in English lol. Thanks for pointing out, I will edit them out :)