Jun 10, 2022
To:Xiellion
Hey! Thanks for the extensive feedback!! :) My thought process behind it was to make certain things the characters say/actions the characters take more understandable to the reader. For example someone who is used to being bullied is more likely to keep his mouth shut even when being offended. Or someone who is a heartthrob would less likely want to put up with weird stories about AI anime dolls.
But I completely understand where you are coming from. As this is the first thing I'm publishing, its a great learning experience for me to figure out what actually is appealing to the reader and what isnt. So thanks a lot again for the feedback :)