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I write stories.

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registered at: May 31, 2022

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Jun 27, 2022

To:Nina Kamiya

Thank you!😄

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Chapter:1

Jun 19, 2022

To:SarahTheMaster

hahaha ikr 😆

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Jun 19, 2022

To:dmznot

They both share the protagonists role^^ Glad to see youve been entertained :)

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Chapter:1

Jun 19, 2022

To:Xan Ti

thanks a lot. 🤗 ive been enjoying ur novel a lot too!

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Jun 18, 2022

To:Hachikoko

Hi, thanks for your nice comment :) I left my thoughts on your story too 😊

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Chapter:1

Jun 18, 2022

Hi, as you asked for some feedback, Im gonna give my thoughts on this :)
The synopsis definitely caught my attention. It did sound interesting. The fact that the vampires even decide to attend the school implies that they dont even like their desire to kill humans. It sounds like the story would focus more on psychological aspects rather than pure "horror action". The only thing i didnt like was the sentence "so their souls could become one" as this doesnt really explain anything. Why would you even want multiple souls to become one, was the question going through my head. Also you cant quite tell what impact the fact that theres now 2 souls in Shizu will have on the story.
Chapter 0 is a good opener into the story. I especially liked "So why do I feel alone" again implicating a psychological focus and deepness. Your writing style seems pretty appealing. Cant say much more for now, but I will definitely continue your story once I find the time to :)

A School For Body Stealers

Chapter:0

Jun 18, 2022

To:Rabat

Haha, yeah there is a reason why I decided to use Lenin-bot as my Avatar 😆

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Chapter:1

Jun 17, 2022

"Tokuma! Are you dead!?" lmao love the dry humour😅

The Tale of how I was Reincarnated as a Hero but Decided I'd Help the Demon Lord Instead.

Chapter:3

Jun 17, 2022

To:SkribblHanna

Thanks a lot! The aim of the novel was to combine absurd comedy with an actual touching drama. :)

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Chapter:12

Jun 14, 2022

eh... im getting negative flashbacks to all that "we are so great"-blabbering i had to endure at my university hahaha.
intersting introduction of the cast, curious where the story will lead 😁

Y: The Tides Are In Our Hearts

Chapter:3

Jun 14, 2022

To:Taylor Victoria

Thanks a lot for the positive feedback! Glad I could entertain you 😁

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Chapter:1

Jun 14, 2022

To:LordDemonLevanov

aww thats so cute!! what a beautiful collaboration :)

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Chapter:1

Jun 14, 2022

To:K.G. Law

Hey, im really glad you enjoyed the chapter!
Thanks a lot for pointing out that error. English punctuation is still confusing af to me :D I will try to avoid the mistake in future chapters!

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Chapter:1

Jun 13, 2022

To:Deleted User

thank you, thats so nice of you! :))

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Chapter:1

Jun 12, 2022

To:Deleted User

Nice, Ive never been to Dresden before, so cant say a lot about it :)

This isn't only my first English story, its also the first story im publishing in general. Its the first novel that I was really happy with and felt confident sharing :) Thus, im very curious to hear what other people think of it and hope the feedback will help me improving myself as a writer even further. ^^

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