Jun 13, 2022
Pink hair stole my heart it's official. ♡
Speaking of, you handled writing a character with no name yet really well! That probably sounds funny, but it's definitely not easy to talk about someone without just describing them over and over, which is fine of course but idk I just thought it was cool how you gave her a "nickname" based on the distinctive features about her appearance/personality that, as a reader, I would recognize, which I did! I didn't feel lost at any point.
I also appreciated how Darren acknowledges *any* kind of attractive person not just women. It's obviously a different kind of acknowledgement, but it still helps me understand further what his general view on people is, and in a way, life too.
My theory so far is that maybe he see's life as kind of... meaningless in a way? Like I said, he seems to have a lot of things in his life that were decided for him and not many of choices of his own. So, it seems to me that he feels like, since nothing matters, why not live off instinct and try not to care too much?
But we did see before that he *does* care about some things, because he cared about his Aunt a lot. So he isn't devoid of empathy or emotion or anything close to that. I'm really looking forward to seeing more of his psychology unfold.
Well! Looks like I caught up now so I'll see you next chapter then! 😊