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Jun 20, 2022

To:Deleted User

Did you misread? I was just adding why Chiffon has her gluttony streak and does things in a "cute" manner.

The Wanderblood Princess and Sir Try Hard

Chapter:8

Jun 20, 2022

To:Deleted User

Her actions are meant to play up the princess part of her character. However, tea snacks are the one thing she loves unquestionably.

The Wanderblood Princess and Sir Try Hard

Chapter:8

Jun 18, 2022

To:Deleted User

I had a feeling it was that. And don't worry. I am probably overanalyzing every comment that comes my way, as I'm not used to putting my work out in the open.

The Wanderblood Princess and Sir Try Hard

Chapter:7

Jun 17, 2022

To:Deleted User

I have noticed your comments, but excuse me when I admit that they don't make too much sense to me. Thank you for taking a look! It bothers me now that you mention some parts that don't flow well, but then again, it's probably normal for any unpolished writing. I haven't had the time yet to incorporate the advice given in comments so far.

The Wanderblood Princess and Sir Try Hard

Chapter:7

Jun 17, 2022

To:Deleted User

Yes, I was recommended that artist. I didn't know anyone to begin with that drew that kind of style so I relied on Kaze.

The Wanderblood Princess and Sir Try Hard

Chapter:7

Jun 17, 2022

To:Saito Forester

I would say that I like to develop an ambiance. When I write, the characters live in an image, and dance to a tune. I place myself in the viewpoint, letting my eyes dream what captures me of that moment. Of course, I have my outline to keep me on the rails during it, but the wording can sometimes get out of hand, haha.

The Wanderblood Princess and Sir Try Hard

Chapter:2

Jun 17, 2022

To:Deleted User

Thank you! I'm not bothered at all. Since it's supposed to be a fun contest, the best I can do is work with what I'm used to.

The Wanderblood Princess and Sir Try Hard

Chapter:1

Jun 17, 2022

To:epicene

Thank you very much! I'll have to take a look at yours and see what they mean (I think I know who it is, haha). It's good to have different perspectives. I know my head can get in the clouds sometimes when I'm imagining a scene.

The Wanderblood Princess and Sir Try Hard

Chapter:1

Jun 17, 2022

To:Saito Forester

I believe it depends on the reader. I've been told to expect readers on this site that enjoy brisk, easy to digest media. Not my personal style, but thank you for checking it out!

The Wanderblood Princess and Sir Try Hard

Chapter:1

Jun 16, 2022

To:LinYang

I wrote this chapter while staring at that exact meal. Maybe that is why it came out this way.

The Wanderblood Princess and Sir Try Hard

Chapter:6

Jun 16, 2022

To:LinYang

Haha, everyone loves the wall so much.

The Wanderblood Princess and Sir Try Hard

Chapter:5

Jun 13, 2022

To:Deleted User

Chiffon's just silly for thinking that she's an independent gal, don't you think?

The Wanderblood Princess and Sir Try Hard

Chapter:6

Jun 09, 2022

To:OscarHM

I see your point, which is similar to another comment. I've been fighting to compromise a balance of description while demonstrating the obsessiveness that Chiffon puts on appearances.

Do you have an example of that exposition? Like a line I can dwell upon.

The Wanderblood Princess and Sir Try Hard

Chapter:1

Jun 09, 2022

To:Deleted User

I was originally going to have Caramello cough to notify her, but then had the idea that leaving him standing there would drive more comedy.

The Wanderblood Princess and Sir Try Hard

Chapter:5

Jun 08, 2022

To:WALKER

I see. I was hoping that Caramello's antics would be funny, but hopefully, he will be moreso soon enough.

The Wanderblood Princess and Sir Try Hard

Chapter:4

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